I liked this story

Love the story! But his name changed from Bradley to Andrew...? I like Andrew better ;)

Ahhh it's so fluffly I'm gonna diiiie :"D LOVE IT LOVE IT!

I am glad someone took on Mary and Kitty's story and you did a fine job it it.

This is only a small criticism, but most people (especially fashionable families) would never want to spend summer in London if they had another option. The smell of the Thames would discourage them from traveling to the city without the cold of the winter season to chill the water and preserve the sewers. That's why they always make references to "The Season" in London, rich people would travel to the city for winter and get all of their socialization for the year done in the cold months. Other than that (and some other small historical issues) the story is wonderful and I look forward to reading more.

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This is beautiful! I'm so happy that Mary got her happily ever after! and you have done it so beautifully! great, great job!

Great story. Like reading about the other two
Bennets sisters. Like to see more stories
of the sisters.

A really, really nice story.

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Very nice! I always like reading about Mary and Kitty! And what a surprise that Wickham turned out to be a good father!

Lovely story. I sat up all night from start to finish. I wish you explained Mr. Rawlins background a little. George Wickam a good father! Ha! Lydia was consistant: useless. Did she try to pimp off her sister? It was all great! Thanks againl.

Wow! Great finale...just wished for more of Mary's romance ;)

WOW! Who expected all of that? Loved that Wickham became a better man whilst Lydia still needed to grow up!

great story! love Mary's suitor ;) Hope it works out! reading on...for now, it's kinda late for pacific time ;)

Oh Heaven, what a mess! Back into the trenches I go!