Reviews for Possessive
SabakuNoNatsumi chapter 3 . 4/20/2008
Kool verses(i have no idea how u spell that!)_ i love haoyaoh
Karen chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
OMG! Hao keeps a diary? And you know where it is? Can I see it too? PWEASE?
lady kina chapter 2 . 9/25/2007
i can't believe that flammer...what a rude person! oh well...just don't take it seriously...i found your poems were great, i had to reread some just to make sure i understood but they were good! we! i'm not sure if this is over but if it isn't please continue! kya!
The Flammer killer chapter 2 . 9/23/2007
(Whacks the evil flammer)

The poems were sweet and a great insight into the Asakura's minds so ignore the cruel flammer.

Is there gonna be anymore chapters?
thoughtless dreamer chapter 3 . 9/23/2007
*Grumbles* ...Y'know... *Sighs* I dun like it when you get all pessimestic about yourr writing; it's really good, darn it!

On a lighter not, I liked this poem, too! Especially that last line. -You- might not think that it fits in all that well with the rest of the poem, but -I- think that it helps to support that this is "Anna," and provides a sense of the character that all SK fans are familiar with. And that just helps to make the poem all that more...Anna-ish. So yeah.

Great job! I hope you continue to update/post more stories 'n poems 'n stuff!

~Jessie
thoughtless dreamer chapter 2 . 9/23/2007
Yay! New story, new story, new story! Squee!~

Aw, it really does sound like a possesive Yoh-chan. Geez, this is the first twincest I've read in...um...since the last time Joh posted her last twincest fic *Beams* Yeah, since then. I think I'm falling in love with the pairing all over again.. X3 Thankies~

But really, this was a lovely poem; you can feel the desperation and recklessness that he's feeling in the words you chose to portray those emotions. Wonderful job darling-I'm also VERY happy that you updated something!

~Jessie
Flammer would get you chapter 2 . 4/4/2006
By my name, you've probably got the idea.

Flammer, and yes, I've found another boring episode of Flammer would get the fiction Possesive.

Is this a poem or what?

Shut up and leave me alone? What kind of author's note is that?

Tsk. Tsk Tsk. If you're going to write something, oh please make sure it's not a boring story. Uhgg! I don't think you'll get many readers.

Maybe you'll get rid of this review.

Come to think of it, if you want to get rid of this review, maybe you could use the simplest way, DELETE THIS FIC.

You're just inserting yourself at the world of Shaman King. Get lost.
Kaoru Gal chapter 2 . 3/28/2006
so good! I love your writing style!

-Joh
Yumeorb chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
I love possessive Hao XD Esepcially when it's Yoh that he's possessive over ;P
thoughtless dreamer chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
It...was...SO...good!

Omg, that was so awesome, cuz you got it totally in character, and, and...and itt was the TWINS *Huge grin* This made me so happy, cuz I LOVE your writing (you've got such a talent!) And you totally rock! Keep writing
O.O chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
this... is ...AWSOME! XD
Kaoru Gal chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
that was cute, beyond words thanx! i loved it!

-Joh
Bex the Hat chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
aw so sweet *does puppy eyes*...UPDATE FAST!

lots of love

~chibi fire angel~
Shinikage Mei chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
He has a diary? . . . Can I have a copy? X3