Personally, I think Naruto should have gotten mad at how they got him to the party. But that is just how I am. I guess a stupid dipshit like blondie would just forgive them. Well, the story is good so far, keep it up.

im confused on the 2 prologues. What happened?

Interesting story but somehow i don't expect an update any time soon...now i'm sad

Odd but interesting. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.

You have a good story and an original pairing (Everything not naruhina or yaoi is original nowadays). I'm going to continue reading this...

hmm NaruTayuya, like the interactions they seem plausiable. Can't wait for a new chapter but it does show you something, Ayame seems to like to tease Naruto.

Well this has some potential. I'm looking forward to read more, so please update soon. Oh and also more Tayuya, please?

more i need more pretty please

I'm confused ( oh well, ill be waiting

i think you should have had Naruto go Demonic on the Iwa bastards, and how could NARUTO leave the Tsuchikage-bastard to leave his "ninja" being so brutal! not to mention the brothel situation like that! other than my moral complaints, and the fact that the Rasenga can crush rock, good job

I really like your story, please continue

loli

I really like this story. Nice, original plot, good action, believable stuff, etc. Nice work.

No pressure, but... please update soon!

-demonicnargles

yes good chapter the story is getting better i havent read it in a while because i forgot how it went so i re-read it anyways continue soon c ya

i keep saying this, but great action.

really liked the assassination attempt on naruto and how you portrayed everyone reacting

great writting, really liked the tsunade sakura coversation