| Reviews for Nibbles |
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Guest chapter 20 . 10/16/2017 I'm confused...what happened to Pip and Seras? |
kitsuneluvuh chapter 20 . 4/4/2017 Well... I understand that you came back to this after a long hiatus and had lost interest in it by then, but I think maybe you should fix the fact that a major plot point was that Christian was hired to sterilize Integra, and had succeeded in making her infertile, not impregnate her like you say he was hired to do in the final chapter... |
Sunset Nightfall chapter 14 . 11/3/2016 Ok. I never thought this would get better than the first few chapters I've read. BUT DAMN, MAN. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. HUMOR AND DRAMA IN THE SAME CHAPTER IS NICE. Can't wait to read MORE. HAHAHAHAHAHA. |
AliceCambio chapter 20 . 10/31/2015 Very good. Love the end and the whole thing, really. Is there a sequel? |
Guest chapter 20 . 7/10/2015 What a strange ending! The only thing I really hated was that you created an OC (possibly a male Mary Sue), gave him this preternatural (unrealistic) strength, cunning, skill, wisdom, and intuition, then also made sure he ended up with Seras. Come on! Pip was right for Seras. The whole reason she finally accepts her vampire nature is because of PIP! He cares enough about her to sacrifice his LIFE for her! He's a HUMAN MERCENARY and he willingly puts himself in danger trying to save a VAMPIRE! Their love is legit, man. I don't know what kind of relationship Seras has with Alucard (it does seem at least somewhat familial), but her relationship with Pip couldn't have gotten any more real. Only Pip was able to get Seras to accept what she was and fulfill her potential. It seems awfully convenient for some age-appropriate dude to come along and sweep her off her feet. Give Pip some credit...(and a French accent is sex-ay, unlike the hideous German accents from the anime). Anyhow, it was still a pretty awesome story, and I had a great time reading it. It was especially fun seeing young, bratty/snobby Integra. Oh, and I LOVE your fic "Saved," it's one of my favorites in the Hellsing verse. ...I still can't believe you're a dude! Good to see some guys like fanfic, especially Alucard/Integra fanfic. :D Thanks for writing, and I hope you're still writing somewhere, even if it's not on FF dot net. |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/10/2015 Okay, I can't ignore this anymore... OMG, SANIS! YOU'RE A DUDE?! |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10/2015 ...about the gas chamber... |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10/2015 I'm sorry, how could Integra think any ugliness came from her Indian genes? Indian women are gorgeous, and every Indian girl I've know in person has been beautiful. British women can be beautiful, of course, but they don't stand out as much. Hopefully Integra lost her internalized ethnocentric views by the time she was an adult. Also, I think I made this comment before, but I still hate the comment about |
Gabriel H. Sapphire chapter 20 . 6/7/2015 Lol |
Brenda293 chapter 20 . 12/24/2014 So I guests she finally say yes .It was about time . A good story . |
Brenda293 chapter 19 . 12/24/2014 The first part of her diary was a bit too soft .Beside that ,it was not too bad. |
Brenda293 chapter 18 . 12/24/2014 Has no one ever told you that lying is bad? |
Brenda293 chapter 17 . 12/24/2014 And now he has a new friend .Call me paranoïd but I still don't trust this young man. |
Brenda293 chapter 16 . 12/24/2014 A disturbing chapter but it was a well done one . |
Brenda293 chapter 15 . 12/24/2014 Well there was no dead men ,so next chapter . |