dogshit story narutos never gets angry at any ninja. you're a bad writer

so cool he just forgives everyone

This story was very dramatic, but...

This story like a trash

Great story i loved it, but now theres a void because idk wat to read

Fucking lame you should have just had naruto kill them or something. Weak as fuck

narutos gf is fkin useless i swg this bitch is stupid

Kishimoto would be proud! Especially with Flashbacks

Wow we sure didn't have any standards back then if even crap like this can get 5k favs.

Sakura: "You knew I liked him and I bet you thought if he was out of the picture then I would say yes to a date"
Naruto: "No, that's not true. You have to believe me"
Sakura: "You knew I liked him and I bet you thought if he was out of the picture then I would say yes to a date"
Me: "Fine, you're right. I did it on purpose"

I remember a long time ago when this fiction was considered one of the best Stories on this site, and I believed so as well at the time. Now though, after revisiting it I wonder what in the ever loving fuck was I thinking? This is terrible. I guess I was just easily impressed. This fanfiction is worth reading only to take notes on what NOT to do in a story.

complete bullshit in the second chapter

Naruto is putting the past behind him and I'm putting this bullshit story behind me, I'm out.

If he barely wins the fight then he's not gotten his training right, sasuke is a S rank true but never one of the strongest

chapter 2 and the story already goes down the drain ... there is NO WAY IN HELL he would go back to konoha ... this is such an incredibly blunt and obviously forced plot it is hurting my head ...