This is magnificently written and I look forward to reading more.

Hmm, yes, Theodur, I suppose you're right about Jaheira. Thanks for bringing that to my attention. To tell you the honest truth, I've never really understood what a Harper actually is (Yes, I call myself a hardcore BG fan and yet there's still so much I am clueless about, heh) I mean, I guess I kind of know what a Harper is but that just sort of slipped my mind as I was writing that scene, I suppose... oops.

But, anyway, I'll try and fix that as soon as I can. I still want Jaheira to not really support many of Kanara's decisions about her profession and choices, but maybe I'll just have to change the wording around a little, hmm?

Thanks for the review!

~Forbidden Amber

This is pretty interesting and well written, too. Just one little nit - I'm afraid that Jaheira's prejudice against the profession of bard doesn't make sense, considering that she is a member of The Harpers, and bards make up the bulk of that organization. Their duty to collect, store and share stories of various lore and adventure is one of the most important things to any Harper, and Jaheira as a Harper should recognize this task as just as important.

Aside from that little discrepancy, this is really quite good.

Hmm... Very nice... Would be cool to see some made-up NPCs...

Not a bad start, you seem to got the characters, and interested in seeing how Kanara turns out and who else they may pick up. You do have my attention and looking forward to more.