Wow that was great!

Oh no I hope Harry stays with snape

Love it! I just wished that Snape was a lil nicer to Potter.

No don’t stop

Love it so far and hope u will start updating it again some day soon

This is so good
I’m new to your story
You should continue

So when he goes and help the brothers and sisters of the death girl, i mean he goes to sleep, they had a long conversation and he doesnt you know he doesnt go and help her, i dont know, you put a rape scene and left it like that... Even after you write that he will protect children you left it like that...
I would have understand if he acts as a gryffindor little tips there and stuff like that and he goes to protect the kid you know, with incomplete information, and some sort of riddikulus uniform. Sorry i am into magical girls or gears or stuff like that, that requires transformations, you know hehehe, and being snape his scowl of being a dark prince, will make him cute, so cute.
Well whatever i like your story, please continue with the grate job, and save the girl from the precarious situation... And heros with not all the info are funny.

I love the plot!

Cool

oh wow! I really do hope that you come back to this story. :) I would love to see how Severus fulfills his destiny! What an awesome concept! :)

I love the idea of the auras I wish this story was longer

NOOOO! Why did you abandon this? I am usually extremely skeptic of any type of Snape-being-a-father-figure fanfictions, as OOCness is a common problem and unlikely plotlines make the whole story, for me, unbearable to read. This, however, is amazing. The plot is completely and utterly original, and characters are kept very much IN character. Though Severus' cold shield is melting a little, it is not so abrupt as to be unrealistic, but layers upon layers are piled on top of one another, making him a brilliant and complex character.

Though I know that it has been a whole 7 years, 4 months and 2 weeks, or 2693 days, I urge, no, I BEG you to continue with this story. If all fanfictions were so highly original, ingenious and well-thought out, the FanFiction archive would be a much more enjoyable place to look through.

So, on behalf of all the readers of this fanfiction, whether they have reviewed or not, and for all those on , I plead with you to continue this beautiful, beautiful story. Please.

Snowfeather4876

A very fine start to a story that could have many twists and turns.

oh, cool, so glad I found your story, can't wait to read more! Well done!

I love it please update soon! Can not wait to
Read more.