| Reviews for A Walking Shadow |
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   Pyrope10 chapter 62 . 3/20 Lovely. This story showcases intelligent adult compression to a strategic degree. Well done. |
| Pyrope10 chapter 1 . 3/17 What a start! |
| Guest chapter 62 . 1/1 It feels like there should be more. |
| Confused reader chapter 4 . 12/23/2019 Where is part 1? This feels like a sequel to a story in which we see Snape develop feelings for Hermione, in which Hermione grows up a bit, leaving the school girl behind her, in which spells can be activated but not fired, or something, in which Hermione learns about how people's hearts can be branded? and that is geographically dependent?, etc etc etc. There's is so much world building missing that you're losing readers... |
| PodkayneGold chapter 6 . 10/1/2019 As of the end of chapter six, I still have no idea what the hell is going on or what either of them are talking aboutit's like they're both speaking in riddles the entire time. It's very good, and too notch imagery and emotion, I just hope things get a little more clear or I get a little less dumb soon. |
| Guest chapter 62 . 7/25/2019 Your story is beautifully written and has a unique style that felt like I was looking in on a dream sequence at times. The sense of doom invoked by the birthing of the dementors and the tentative hope sparked by each workaround has made for an engaging, suspenseful and throughly enjoyable tale. |
| JellyToastx chapter 62 . 6/24/2019 To put it bluntlythis fic is very hard to understand and follow. It gets super confusing at times and you need to read between the lines. That being said it is beautifully worded and is very different from other fics. Worth a read if you're into a bit of abstractness. Thank you! |
| blaulune chapter 62 . 6/13/2019 Your storytelling is beautiful written, this is my ultimate favorite. Thank you! |
| Jabuticaba chapter 8 . 4/27/2019 I'm very confused...sorry... |
| Rabshinokami chapter 3 . 3/5/2019 Sorry bit lazy to log in rn, I dont normally review complete stories that are posted but I had to say I love the commet saying his mind( can't spell worth anything sorry) had more buttons than his frock coat. It made my day so thank you |
| Vespian chapter 6 . 2/6/2019 Sorry, but as much as i try to, I just can't get my head around what's going on here. Alot of it just isn't making any sense to me. Way too confusing. |
| scarletarcher chapter 62 . 11/7/2018 This story is beautiful. The prose is wonderful too: at times it reads like poetry. While I am not exactly sure that I understood everything, not everything is meant to be understood. This story just leaves me with a sense of loss and hope. |
| Jeraly chapter 62 . 10/5/2018 Thank you for this wonderful piece |
| Jeraly chapter 61 . 10/5/2018 Agonizing and amazing |
| Jeraly chapter 60 . 10/5/2018 Too much! |
