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The village outside of Hogwarts is Hogsmede. Also, it etc. for etcetera. And it's Galleons, not gallons.

Snape's father was a Muggle.

Slughorn was the Potions teacher at Hogwarts when Harry's parents were students. And you've misspelled Madem Pomfrey's name. Also, the Transfiguration teacher was McGonagall.

3. One song has to be speechless. Don't know the Artist but it would be perfect for james and lily.

But overall your story was still good. Well done!

And why is McGonagall so OOC?

Sorry but your answer to one of the questions is not very full. How did Dumbledore find out? Your answer was: He's Dumbledore, he's bound to find out. However, even though I still believe Dumbledore was the greatest wizard of his time, he's not perfect. There had to be something that alerted Dumbledore that Ethan was actually Harry, and something that made Dumbledore sure that Harry wasn't a Death Eater.

CRAZY

The flow of the story is somewhat inconsistant, but then i've only read one chapter and the idea looks promising.

Nice story can't wait for the sequel

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Seriously i kept thinking "what clock, what clock?". Then i realized on reading the word invisibility that you meant "cloak". But story is good, nice base it has got

Wow I'm crying ;_; I loved this story so much

FUCK YOU JAMES AND SIRIUS!