Cute story

James can see the future

:D!Really beautiful poem there!

Mmmmm!Awwwwh!So so adorable!And a lovely french speaking Remus is irresistible!

Ah god,and what an awesome prank it was too!And Sirius's confession was cute!

:D!oohh!Well well,a drunk Remus is just too cool!

OOHH!Wow,i lovvveeee how you did Remus there with his thoughts and memories!And the way Sirius is so special for him,niiice!

This. was. amazing.

I loved the emotion and you captured everyone so well!

I also loved the poem at the end- it describes them and what they share so well! Very beautiful!

That was very interesting that you actually ended it in the last chapter with the last line from the poem and then had the last chap as kind of an epilogue with the poem- very insightful and very, like I said, interesting.

I also really, really liked your Peter. I loved how he was actually very insightful and observant :D

I just loved the whole thing, all in all, and how it progressed and how Siri was so very emotional (especially sweet X3)

Amazing piece of work, great job!

Bloody wonderful!

What a lovely story!

I really appreciated the read and I especially liked how Sirius took some time to realize his feelings. It made the plot so much more interesting.

Thanks for a fun read.

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Very cute! I loved your Peter, especially when he was just scuttling around as a rat or the likes. And Remus and Sirius are love, of course.

You left out many necessary commas and EVERY SINGLE TIME it should've read "quiet" it said "quite." Despite this, I enjoyed the story (If I hadn't I wouldn't have read the entire thing.) and thought it was funny and sweet.

WOW. I'd say more on how awesomely awesome this is, but it would take up a couple pages, so just...WOW

Great story! I loved it.

Beautiful poem!

Good job!

reaad this tory yesterday, loved it, absolutely amazing! x