I know how to get through the ice. Tokra have a solution..

I was just re-reading this (for the umpty-millionth time) and thought - wouldn't it be GREAT if we had a savvy president like Hayes in office now? With George and Jack lined up to succeed him?

Thank you for writing such great stories. I hope everything is okay. If you ever write a book please post it because you are a great writer and I would love to read it. Again thank you for posting your stories so I can have the joy of reading them. (I can't write worth beans). Reader51

You're railroading, all Ian has to say the wraith are there and would detect the city waking and destroy it. Plus not enough power in the zpm which the city needs three to run on. Force them to wait a bit until they're actually ready. The Asgaard would probably be a tremendous asset here. Also replicators? Not a mention this far?

It makes me laugh when Maggie yells and Ian and Nathan for cussing, then she turns around and cusses herself! Do as I say, not as I do...!

I guess I've reviewed this before, I had to back up a chapter so I could do it again... I love all your Campers! stories, and this one was great, too. It had ALMOST too much going on! And although I've read the later stories and enjoyed them, I find myself not very drawn to Weir. I'm not sure why, even in the TV series I didn't care for her - I felt like her personal agenda/curiousity got in the way of her good judgement, and negotiator/diplomat or not I've always thought she was too push about the Atlantis expedition and it was too rushed. (In the TV series, too! But I'm sincerely in love with Ian, Shawn, Andrew and River, and love when they're together and with Jack and Sam and Daniel and Teal'c. Nothing gets better than that! Thanks for writing all these great stories, and thanks also to whoever convinced you to continue after that first one!

I loved the story, and I wish someone had tapped YOU to create the new Stargate series instead of the crap they tried to pass off as Stargate Universe (You'd think they'd learn not to follow something upbeat and intelligent with dark political intrigue drivel- you lose the audience that made the first series a hit). I could definitely watch a Stargate future-show where the SGC was staffed and run with a few of the old cast and the characters you created for your Campers! series!

My only complaint about this story is that I really don't want to see Ian going to Atlantis. Not yet, anyway. I like his interaction with SG1 and River and Shawn and Cassie - and I'm sure he'd like to have his OWN dog around for a while, too, right?

A beautiful story! Did a really great job with letting the truth out too!

It's a great story as was the series however I don't feel you should end it. I feel that eventually you should continue, keep it up!

What happend to the devices Ian used to fight the Gould? Did he lose them or what?

What a satisfying story! Looking back at the original Campers! story, you have created a beautiful, engaging, intelligent series. I am thankful to have found it.

again nitpicking, wasnt the rings built by the Ancients around the same time they built the stargates (ie why the Ori have some) and thus Ian would have also been some help in that area?

umm, sorry to mnitpick but isnt there closer to 9 billion people in the world not 4?

I know that you asked people not to be picky about your technobabble but how on earth (or otherwise) wouls they get and IDC befor the wormhole had engaged? the idea is that the IDC is a radio signal that is transmitted from the GDOs to the SGCs computers and each team or race has their own signal which can be changed that allows the airmen on duty to identify the incomming travellers.

Really long in number of chapters, but each chapter wasn't all that long. It might look less intimidating to readers if you went back and combined some of the chapters so the story was 30-40 longer chapters instead of 113 short ones.

I have really enjoyed this entire series, as you can probably tell by the speed with which I've gone throgh the stories.

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