Great story. I loved it. It gets a 9/10 just cause I didn't realize it was the 4th book till the second to last chapter.

Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Like the snake. Hope Sirius gets his bike back. Hope Harry doesn't turn evil in this one. Don't mind if he's dark though. Loving the series so far.

Too much introspection. Harry needs to stop worrying so much about things that are Beyond his control.

I mean, the obvious would be crouch jr., Since he's the other one in on the plan, but since you said it would be the second most obvious and he's the first, it can't be him. EVEN if it would make sense since Moody has to be real, at since Harry has been seeing the actual Moody on the map, or he would see coach's name.

I get the feeling she's some kind of a monster slayer. Seeing as how she went after Leon specifically.

Great job

I'm a ravenclaw, I must be. I never would have guessed or else.

Boris' old master was Tom Riddle.

he must be. that is the only possible way that Harry would have known the eximo, having a limited subconscious access to Tom Riddle's magical abilities.

Oh, boy, You killed Cedric?

You must be so proud. I'm honored and privileged to have this opportunity to REVEL in your genius and cunning. Never before have I seen Cedric die. Nobody ever kills him off!

Heavy sarcasm aside, I'm disappointed that Cedric died in YET ANOTHER fanfiction. The poor guy can't seem to catch a break.

I like Boris. Will there also be a Natasha?

PLEASE KEEP GOING

Amazing story, though I noticed a bit of hole. Andromeda said that she was warding the tent to keep Harry and Tonks in, but they both walked out without a problem.

I feel like im missing something here.. is this a part of a series? Or is this a solo story?

Ammolite - transfers negative energy into positive... very accurate indeed.

Hmmm, I don't remember reading this chapter before. Starting to wonder if I ever finished reading this story now.