Hi! I know you probably won't see this, but I am loving this story and thought I should probably leave a review or two.

I am absolutely loving this story! You've really managed to capture the Jack and Rose of the movie, and it's very well-written. I also love all of your original characters, they're all really nice. Also, I kinda like the random drama.

If you see this, have a great day/night!

-Audrey :)

I LOVE THIS STORY! ITS THE BEST TITANIC IF JACK HAD LIVED EVER

This is a really good story!(btw the TitanicDancer guest a few reviews back is not me.)

I wish jack was tickled more

I’m a huge fan of this book! MAJOR FANGIRLING OVER HERE! The only thing is Jack seems too nice to be in a butcher shop. He’s so kind, innocent, and humane:). I kinda hope that changes. I LOVE YOUR WRITING SO FREAKING MUCH! PLEASE BECOME AN AUTHIR I WILL READ EVERY SINGLE BOOK!. :DDDDDDD

Awesome! Btw I love your A/Ns. They are great. I like what you did with Jack and smoking. I can't see him addicted to smoking either. You are the best!

I love it! I think you did really good with describing the clothes especially for not much being out on the internet. The ring part was pretty good I read one where it was a gold band with a red diamond rose and Jack had "You Jump, I Jump" engraved on the inside and nothings ever gonna beat that but this was still good. Of course, as everyone does I wish Tommy and Fabri survived but then again I wish the Titanic never sunk...There has gotta be heartbreak somewhere. I hope there is something about Cora and her fate. THIS IS LEGIT THE BEST FANFICTION EVER!

Love it!

Wow. That’s all I can say. You’ve got some serious talent! I hope to see your name on some books One day. Love it! I like the amount you put in Cals pocket. I hope you do some more Titanic fanfic(tho this was 13 years ago so u have prbly done some and u might never read this) love it!

Yet another wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it! We have very similar ideas of how Titanic REALLY should have ended ;D. I loved the stories of their childhood! What a brilliant idea! You word choices are really wonderful too! The only thing i noticed is that Rose should have been born on January 28th 1891 instead of 92. He was 21 when Titanic sank, not 20. Still a wonderful chapter and I can't wait for more!
P.S. Just so you know none of my corrections are meant to be mean or like a know-it-all. Just friendly peer corrections that I thought your should know because we are all human and make mistakes. Inaccuracies are normal and I know I would rather be told them then never know I did something wrong(And nothing is actually wrong. This is fanfiction. You can do whatever the h*ll you want lol. So if you meant to do it, its your choice.) ;D

Another very good chapter! I really liked it. I did like the first one a bit better but this one is still wonderful. I love how you included the women and her two children that were on the lifeboat Rose jumped off(I’m assuming that’s who they were) I cant wait to read the rest! Your really good at this!

Oh. My. GODDD! This is sooooooo good. I love it so much! Lots of titanic fanfictions are just cheezy and feel so unrealistic. This is sooo much better and I love it! Im looking forward to more! I was kind of thinking it would have been nice to have Rose blow the whistle but I like what you did too. I really liked that you had him fall unconscious from the whistle. I haven't read the rest but im hoping to see some strength in Rose since thats the whole reason James Cameron killed Jack anyway and I want a story the proves Jack didn't have to die for that to happen. Thank you so much for this!

Freaking awesome story. I loved this so so so much!

Good

Ahhhh! I love this story so much!
Did you watch Little House on the Prairie? I was wondering because theres a Dr. Baker in Little House too. Thank you!