i love it you continue it

Good..Very Good indeed!;D I love the conversation between Roy and Havoc!It was funny!ehehe..;) also the date part. Well,Keep up the great work and I hope you'll update soon!ja ne!_

-snicker- Poor Roy. Very interesting. I'd like to see how this shall turn out... -slaps- Update soon!

wow i'm really interested! How is this gonna turn into a Royai? Please update asap!

wahahahaha! oh, god! i can't stop laughing! poor roy. yes, please do continue. this is great! *laughs again*

btw, i like your characterization of riza.

i don't think there's anything wrong with your writing style. but the way your a/n sounds, you lack confidence in your own. hope this won't deter you from writing.

update soon. *hugs* yes, i'm giddy.

I finally read it all. But since I already submitted a review, it wouldn't let me send another for that chapter.

It's good, kiddo. Keep up the AWESOME work!

Meh. I'll read it all eventually. xD You own. Actually, I own you... and then you own this... it's all a nice little owning circle. xD

You luff me, and you know it.

Eh, buddy? Eh? xD

Ouchies he made a big mistake. I feel sorry for him. You're doing good so far! Geez what is with that thi... ah woman?

write more does riza end up with roy?

Oh my goodness! Roy Mustang. . .

I like your writing style! It's different, because you use phrases like "Our Roy Mustang" and "We" and "I don't mean to brag" even though it's a third-person story. But I think that gives a sort of humor to the story though, IMHO, so I rather like it.

That second chapter makes me snicker. Oh, the chubby cheeks. Roy's not chubby. He's just drawn that way. I enjoyed reading the banter between Roy and Jean.

This third chapter is so funny. Poor Roy, forgetting names. I think guys are actually more forgetful than girls anyway. But yeah, that would piss me off. Sleaza. Nice nickname there. Heheheh. I hope Mustang doesn't get torn to shreds.

Anyway, please write more soon. It's a fun story, and I'm curious to see where this goes!

Violent woman! Poor roy :( .

Poor, poor Roy...

I feel for the guy. You'rfe giving him a hard time, aren't you? Hahaha! This story is awesome so far! Great job!

great story! it's really funny, and i love the way you word stuff! :)

Oh... shit... Roy is a DEAD man...

I had to add you to my author alert list and favorite authors list after reading this chapter. This has to be one of the best pieces of fanfiction in the Fullmetal Alchemist section. Well done! I will add this story to my favorites as well.