Wow. Just... WOW. This was an excellent addition. Very in line with what could have happened. Everyone nicely in character. Thoughtful, insightful... Just... WOW. Thanks so much for this!

FANTASTIC story excellently well written
You nailed both characters and military higher ups

great story

I loved this. Great characterizations all around. This is definitely a conversation I could see taking place. Thanks!

Perfect. We needed this in the actual episode. John and Jack interacting is so wonderful. I wish they gave us more than 2 episodes with them together.

Nice missing scene.

Very, very nice! It was a nice story about something that should have happened that on the other hand, could not be spared the screen time to do. In other words, the perfect subject matter of a fanfic, that was well executed. Thank you for writing this.

WOw! I just love it when you get Jack together with Sheppard. There's just so much similarity between them and yet also so much difference that it's intense when they take up a scene together. I love them both and I gotta say that your writing is one of the best I've encountered. More power to you.

Loved this. I've always wanted to see an expansion of the way they talked in Rising.

Kay x

This was fantastic, I loved the detail you went into. Great job, one of the best fics I've read. :)

Hey another fantastic one and I thought Rising was a one off...damn I was wrong. You're just so good at getting into their heads and putting it down in typeface.

Something along this lines i would have loved to see in the show. An extremely excellent story wonderful job.

Lovely! This is definitely the best "missing scene" I've seen to explain Sheppard's promotion. Thank you!

Great story! I love getting to see Jack/Sheppard interaction. I think that a lot alike in many ways and it's cool to see them together like this.

This was great, a really insightful fic!