| Reviews for What's Out There |
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   KnightLawn chapter 1 . 5/18/2018 This was well done I liked this. |
| ISwearAngelWasThere chapter 26 . 11/22/2017 Wow! I really love this story! Im so glad you updated! You're a really good writer. Please write more I need to know what happens! |
| there's no one here chapter 24 . 5/25/2007 Wow... |
| MovieBuffStarlet chapter 24 . 1/23/2007 AH! NO! |
| jesuisl0ser chapter 24 . 1/22/2007 AAH! Poor Angel! Update soon! |
| ickle-s-10 chapter 24 . 1/22/2007 yay! an update! wow, now i REALLY dont like corey. i mean, at least he seemed OKAY before (well, not abusive or anything), but now...urg. i hope collins' dad is okay...or, at least collins gets to talk to him... just a quick suggestion: because you kept going back and forth between angel and collins, it got a bit confusing...you might want to just put something between the paragraphs so that we know when the setting and pov is changing. xD thanks! update soon please! |
| Snicker Puff chapter 24 . 1/22/2007 I'm so happy you updated this fic :P And I really like the way you alternated between Collins' and Angel's POVs. It was a bit confusing at first, without any breaks, but I figured out the pattern quickly enough. I like the way you portrayed Angel here, she's still strong, even though she may not be as strong as Cory. And I liked how you described Cory's surprise at how quickly Angel can run in heels :) Great job! I'm trying to come up with some constructive criticism, but I don't really have any for this chapter... just that bit I mentioned about the breaks. |
| Looking4YouAgain chapter 23 . 1/21/2007 well not that it wasn;t a good story and the writting was really good! but this totally pissed me off first angel is so not angel! like angel was so bitchy and rude she knows ppl care about her and angel seemed so selfish like its always about her, then her flirting with guys that aren't collins! then this cory! its like she doesn't love collins anymore :( not to mention angel's mood swings like i said FANTASTIC story but not it pissed me off |
| ickle-s-10 chapter 23 . 1/9/2007 I HATE CORY! Sorry, but I do. He's being really awful. I MIGHT understand if Angel hadn't told him about Collins, but she DID. And he STILL isn't backing off. Grr... Update soon please! |
| EZeeBaby chapter 23 . 12/29/2006 Ahh I love this. Update quick! |
| jesuisl0ser chapter 23 . 12/28/2006 Ooh, good chapter :) Update soon |
| tutriceange chapter 22 . 11/27/2006 Great Chapter! I don't think I've reviewed for a while... but, I really do love this story! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! *cough*update soon*cough* |
| ickle-s-10 chapter 22 . 11/27/2006 i dont like this cory! collins is better! angel'd better realize that soon... |
| jesuisl0ser chapter 22 . 11/21/2006 Poor Collins never gets a break...update soon! |
| JustTamm chapter 21 . 9/5/2006 NO! Please don't let Angel die! She already has enough drama to deal with! You gotta update soon! |
