Pleaseee comeback

The only reason I started to read this was because it was listed as complete if the story isn’t finished don’t list it as complete

Thanks so much for writing this! What a shame it's unfinished!

it will interisting if Sirius and Snape follow Harry too in Another world.

too many words in one paragraph is make my eyes hurt. can you please edit anf give them spaces? but the story is good.

I love how Peter not traitor but kind Hero and good person. So rare and good for change scenery. haha. sorry bad english

Lilly! Where are you?

Well, this was disappointing. There’s no true conclusion. There’s no sequel. It just seems to be one long teaser.

Abandoned but not forgotten! Love this fanfic!

I guess you stopped writing this story. Too bad.

Why don't authors give readers the courtesy of putting ABANDONED in the summary? I usually only read completed stories, so it's frustrating to be misled like this.

This is a great concept and well-written, but the story moves too fast. Situations aren't developed thoroughly before moving on.

For example, Harry was only fifteen months old when he was murdered. It wasn't until the previous chapter that you stated there was a difference ghosts and spirits, so how the ghost of a toddler could do everything you had the "guardian" was very confusing.

Also, who are Albus and Harry to decide what would be too difficult for James and Lily? That is so incredibly offensive, I can't even begin to express my disgust.

The attack at Godric's Hollow took place on 31 October (Hallowe'en), 1981.
31 October 1981 was a Saturday.
James potter eyes are hazel not blue .