You did such a wonderful job with this story. It is well written, and completely believable whether you read it as Leroux, or Lloyd Webber.

omg

this is so well written

i just can't believe how wonderful this is

continue writing more PotO phics

that would be great

this was just..

i could sit here all day describing how fantastic this is

you actually care about your stories

there were no grammar mistakes whatsoever

and being a beta

i loved it

lol

until next time

cheers,

Caroline Butler

Squee for Leroux! :)

The way it was written (diary entry form) was interesting. It allows the reader to see the narrator thoughts. And Christine reminiscing about the past was very thoughtful. The one-shot had a regretful feel. Well, it didn't have a happy tone either. (But I don't know what I'm saying because I read this a while ago.)

And it was very interesting to see you switch gears and write something not modern, not funny, and in a different voice. :)

I love the little twist at the end! That was very sweet.

Very well written, and actually believable for a phan fic! Good work!

What touching prose! This was a very believable, lovely, succint little piece of writing. It is refreshing to see Leroux-based fiction of such high quality.

The last line even brought a tear to my eye...so kudos to you, Elektra! :)

That was truly one of the best-most believable

Poto's I've ever read.

The simple way your portrayal of Christine highlights

her youth-and the qualities that made two men love

her...just right!

Thank you for a moving portrait that remembered

it was a love story for 3.

I don't know how but it brought tears to my eyes while reading it. It was sweet... So very sweet. Well done...