| Reviews for Don't Be Flashin Steel When U Roll Through Compton |
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   Writey the Writer chapter 1 . 3/31 This makes absolutely no sense... its bash galore and it has managed to turn every character into paper-thin copouts. Not to mention the lack of any sensical decisions by any character. Half of the ANBU can't just 'take leave', that would be like half the police force just asking for the day of New York City...it doesn't work like that. |
| DOVAKINNISGOD chapter 5 . 5/5/2019 SWEET HOME ALABAMA! |
| Andreina Cummings chapter 1 . 4/26/2019 Please continue writing this story |
| Monster King chapter 37 . 4/13/2019 Great job please continue the story |
| chancellor77 chapter 19 . 3/1/2018 takimo tsunade...lol nice story though |
| LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo chapter 5 . 2/1/2018 The writing is kinda chaotic. The plot feels so random I feel lost and it's difficult to keep interested... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2017 Hope he finds out Tsunade didn't order his death. And he never calls her sister, he calls her granny |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/25/2017 Not flaming but they were on team 7 lol |
| migros256 chapter 37 . 12/2/2016 Good story |
| reader chapter 11 . 11/27/2016 Can't read anymore of your story. First chapter was alright but then when down hill from there. By the way, that is not how after images work... |
| Stormy Vixen chapter 9 . 10/25/2016 How old are they? Just out of curiosity. Absolutely love your fic by the way! |
| tinktinkkyllz chapter 8 . 7/16/2016 the 2nd hokage is not Loud and easy . he's serious and calm |
| tinktinkkyllz chapter 8 . 7/16/2016 this story is Piss poor |
| scaryorange chapter 1 . 7/9/2016 dumb. |
| FanFicFanatic88 chapter 1 . 6/24/2015 i really like the idea. a naruto who goes back to the sage's time? cool as hell. but it's just very poorly written and i can't get into it. it's not really bad spelling and grammar, but the slang and abbreviations make it look sloppy. this is a story, not a conversation. the characters also don't talk the way naruto characters are expected to talk. try to make yourself a little more faithful to the characters you portray. |
