How did you make it ? I mean it must have been exausting mentaly, for you to write all the physical and mental ordeal that Jarod ,Parker and J have been through . So thank you for all the trouble and for sharing of course .Bye .

I'm surprise that Ethan has not make an appearance to help either Parker or Jarod , since he could hear Catherine's voice .

Yes, because they deserve it .

love it.

Wow... at first i was incredibly confused and had no ide what was going on, that could be that i read this at 2 in the morning. but as the story progressed i started to get more and more into it... it was so dark and disturbing and the way jarods family was used against hm seems to add an extra layer.

i do think that the ending was slightly rushed like you got bored of the story and just decided to end it. what about ramifications from the shootout in the hospital and the fbi raid, surely that would have bought jarod to the atention of the fbi and other official people... mabey you could write a sequel. id be more than happy to read one, or even a prequel... is there a story about what happens to jarod and j, if there is i cant find it.

anyway fantastic story it really had me hooked:D

great storyline, it was really well thought out all the way through.

Wow. Great chapter. Kept the action coming right up until the end. So sad to lose Sydney, but seemed inevitable. Your writing was excellent throughout the story and held my interest page after page. There were so many twists and turns; I never knew what to expect next, including when Parker showed up in the last chapter or when J rescued Margaret. A wonderful piece of work just like we've all come to expect from you. Brava. Well done.

Hi

I just read your story. It was great each chapter let you wanting more. I was a little sad about Sydeny dieing. But other then that it was a great story.

Thanks so much for a wonderful story. The journey has been exciting and difficult. The difficult was the harm/damage done to Jarod and all of his loved ones by the Centre - but, all evil does come to and end, just as it did here. Sorry for Sydney's passing, but he died happy: knowing that Jarod is free and that Jarod has forgiven him. Great news that Jay was the one to find Margaret - that will help him heal and to forgive himself. Glad that MP had the fortitude to shoot Lyle (I suppose that makes me evil, too!)You created many wonderfuly cliffhanders in this story, but the best is the ending: the good ones are free, Margaret is safe, J's family is all together again, J and MP are secure in their relationship. Thanks again for the journey. Please write for us again soon!

Thanks for the update,what a great story its been a long journey but well worth the forward to reading more of your work please keep me

Loved this fic! I'm really sad too see that is has ended... This last chapter was fantastic! Too bad that Sydney died but it made sense that he died. Hope to read something from you soon!

I'm actually very sorry to see this story come to an end, but ... what an ending! You kept the suspense building right until the end (I wasn't expecting the thing with Sydney, but I have to be honest - I would have been disappointed with anything else *G*). Thank you for a great ride!

That was an incredible ending. Finally Lyle got what he deserved, yay! The only sad part (I actually had tears in my eyes) was that Sydney really died. But as much as I hate to admit it: it made sense and would have been too corny otherwise. So I guess I can live with that ;-)

Are you going to finish Winter's Tale soon?

Cathy

WOw, what an ending! The last chapter just zoomed along!

So this is the end?

I was expecting you to kill Margaret, maybe J, but not Sydney (although I don't know why.. it makes sense!).. the last scene was touching.

Again wonderful writing!

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well gr8 chapter plz update soon!