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irisdietrich chapter 6 . 5/28 aw love it |
T chapter 1 . 1/27/2019 How do you guess that! Jim's roommate is actually Mark! |
luvrblu chapter 6 . 10/8/2013 This was wonderful. |
forgetmenotjimmy chapter 6 . 2/1/2011 Lol! I love how you got wonder woman in there! Beautiful! :D |
sami1010220 chapter 6 . 2/7/2008 omg, that was adorable! great job! |
MonkeyPajamas chapter 6 . 8/20/2007 simply... perfect |
MonkeyPajamas chapter 5 . 8/20/2007 Oh yeah, Pam in jeans brings out a gilr-crush moment in me. Because she looks GREAT in jeans. I love your interpretation of Jim's Christmas Card. It is one of those huge mysteries, that even though it is like nearly 2 years later, is still debated. I have sorta had the sneaking suspcion that I read this before, but not sure. I know I have read other stories where the documentary crew gets involved, but Pam getting angry that she is doing everything seems familair to me. But, I couldn't find my review here, and I didn't see it at MTT (if it is posted there, i did a search by title), so maybe I am going crazy. Even so, still enjoying it, and it is good, even if a bit familiar. Oh, and about mtt: if you are still writing and reading... go here: mtt. And break my heart- she was going to Australia with him. |
MonkeyPajamas chapter 3 . 8/20/2007 Wow, another amazing chapter, and them both getting the realization that they knew and the other... and wow. |
MonkeyPajamas chapter 2 . 8/20/2007 Not sure if you used one, or anything like that, but I would suggest a beta, I did notice a few little places where the flow wasn't the greatest, and perhaps a little reworking with a beta could make this even better. But, if you didn't use one, it is great, and if you do have one (now or then), it is still minor, cause its just small flow issues. Maybe have a line break or something (or it could be annoying ffn formatting), because in Ch2 when it switches from Pam to Jim that really threw me for a loop. Pam knows how to watch movies - pajamas and popcorn, nothing Jim adding MnMs... oh yeah, delicious! Its so strange you mention how more 'distant' jim was post Booze Cruise. As I said before, I only watched these episodes mostly after S3 started, but just yesterday, I was rewatching the S2 DVDs, and commentaries, and they mention how after BC/TS they had Jim lay off a bit, and have it more Pam chasing Jim as it was. I love this line: She saw her true feelings for Jim. I also love revisiting all those small Jim/Pam moments from S2. |
MonkeyPajamas chapter 1 . 8/20/2007 I haven't reviewed anything at FFN for a while, but this got recc'd and so excited about it. And I am totally sure (with the very impressive 27 comments) that you are right about Mark being Jim's roommate. Wow, and I just realized how old it is - over a year. Wow. "but had been behind him when he entered, and made a point of sitting next to him" I think it should be she had been behind him for that sentence. Oh yeah, Kevin's band started out as a Steve Miller Tribute band... and now its the Police. Hmm... mysteries of the office. Its so strange reading this nearly a season and half later, its hard trying to remember what it was like at that time for them. Actually, since i only watched S2 after it aired, and most of it after S3 started, it is really strange. This is an amazing start, and can't wait to read more. |
caffeinated crimefighter chapter 5 . 1/1/2007 i meant to say good on other review |
caffeinated crimefighter chapter 6 . 1/1/2007 omg perfect Jim/Pam story so god! |
bonorocks chapter 1 . 6/18/2006 Great story! |
Kyra Cullinan chapter 6 . 5/7/2006 Aw, this is clever and charming. I love that Jim misses having the cameras to look over at and react to Michael. |
Tique chapter 6 . 4/15/2006 Really nice. Chapter 4 was amazing. Oh, and the interaction between Jim and Michael in the first chapter was hilarious and really in-character. “No, you’re not a ‘brother’. Those are their rules. Not mine. I’m down with brothers, but they’re not down with you.” Hahaha! |