| Reviews for Obeying Orders |
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  Guest chapter 15 . 4/30 Beautiful story |
 DalWriter chapter 15 . 7/8/2019 Awww. Glad you closed the awful loop from Australia. Sadly the Admiral's Order was unlawful; glad they followed it anyway. I would have thought since he was there Uncle Matt would have walked her down the aisle. I loved Keeter's crack in church. I'm surprised Harm wasn't sterner with Maddie about Josh Pendry. One thing I did not like about the story was Mac calling the Admiral Dad; that simply would never happen. |
| Cynfenner chapter 15 . 7/22/2018 Zowie! Fantastic first Fan Fic, you can write Rae! Can't wait to read rest of your stories ;-))) |
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/14/2015 This was a wonderfully written story and completely drew me in to read in one sitting. All the characters were well written and I actually would be interested to see what would happen with Jen and Vic. |
| Anonny chapter 15 . 8/17/2015 Yep! Read the rest of the story and still think you're wicked! ;-D At times, it feels like I'm really observing what's going on, it feels so 'real' and true to the characters. If this could really happen, I think a lot of things would happen the way you wrote it. Definitely enjoyed this story. :-) |
| Anonny chapter 5 . 8/16/2015 You, are a wicked, wicked girl! ;-D Of course, this wouldn't/couldn't happen in real life and would never have happened on the show but you've captured the characters quite well and if this was 'really' happening (as in happening in the show) I can easily see in my mind some of the things you've written. :-) |
| EvilQueen93 chapter 1 . 5/17/2015 Loved it Now why couldnt they think of that in the show.I know it would have cut back on the drama but still... would have been great to see. |
| jag389 chapter 15 . 2/6/2015 Great story. Just added it to my favorite list. |
| steamboat chapter 15 . 3/1/2013 fantastic! 1 of the most imaginative " get them to the church on time" stories written. well done! |
| Elanor-G chapter 15 . 9/25/2012 Wow. Funny, romantic, tearful all rolled into one, I love it. Thank you so much for writing it. |
| Saissa chapter 15 . 8/11/2012 I read this story some time ago, but did not review. Well now I have finally read it all and I just want to say that this is a wonderful story. I would love to read the sequel if you have written it. |
| mac05 chapter 15 . 9/24/2011 Great storry. When I started to read it, I couldn't stop. Great humor and wonderfully described emotions. |
| bookimpva chapter 15 . 4/19/2011 Super story. If only the admiral had really taken the initiative while it was on the air! Thanks! |
| phoenixmagic1 chapter 1 . 4/11/2008 This is a wonderfully written story :) I really like the way you write :) God and peace Vanessa :) |
| JagfanNat chapter 15 . 11/17/2007 Read all 15 chapters in one sitting! WOW! Had me me from beginning to end. Brilliant, wrapped everything up beautifully in the end. thanks |
