Reviews for Vader & Luke, Father & Son
Guest chapter 14 . 1/1/2016
Good story. Not bad for a first effort.
JackFrost-300-TrueFrost chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
XD CLASSIC I JUST SAW NEW STAR WARS MOVIE SO :D
frizzlejizzle chapter 14 . 12/22/2015
Biggest load of shite i've ever read.
chimika chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
Alright, something that bothered me was the repeative of word us, explaining things is fine, just don't use the same words over and over.
Virtual Alpha chapter 10 . 10/30/2015
EVERYTHING AND EVERYONE IS OUT OF CHARACTER
1 Vader wouldnt let leia han etc leave, ever, they are like, the highest ranks in the rebbelion or sumething
2 Everything is to straight forward
3 Vader wouldnt be SO FUCKING FRIENDLY towards Leia Han etc
Blake2020 chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
cool
Ana chapter 14 . 4/28/2015
I like it! Very good. I have always been a fan of writing myself and may make a fan fiction of Darth Vader, Darth Sidious, and Darth Talos (But however I will use a different name than Talos for obvious reasons). I like it. I am a big fan of the Sith! Let the Sith Empire live on!
InvaderXion chapter 12 . 11/16/2014
I realized how funny it is that a lord of evil eats girls scout cookies. I bet they're made with real Girl Scouts.
imnotraven16 chapter 14 . 6/29/2012
great story
The Flying Taco chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Well, I read the first few chapters, and it was very good. The only thing I noticed was that it seemed that everything was a bit rushed, and that Luke got angry very quickly.

All in all though, I like it.
fieryhairedmaiden chapter 6 . 4/27/2010
good story... Mara's a little OOC though, otherwise I love it!
Axrel chapter 14 . 3/15/2010
Kit: That was awesome!

Anakin: I love the name Lord Talos! But shouldn't be Darth Talos?

Kit: You should write more Star Wars stories! Inuyasha rocks! : )
tornadoblake2009 chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
great chapter
twisterblake chapter 6 . 2/24/2007
hey great story keep it up until completed
creativesm75 chapter 14 . 2/23/2007
nice.
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