OMG please keep writing this story! It’s soooooooo good!

i do so hope you haven't abandoned this gem! i wish you luck with publishing

ah, bollocks. this chapter made me cry like in the movie when she finds her dad. thamk you!

I love this so much. I know you've got other things going on in your life more important than a story, but I still wanted to let you know I appreciate your work. I hope you're doing okay, and I hope you'll not give up on your stuff even if you've lost inspiration. I feel like I want to give you a hug for everything you've done. :)

Hello. I don't know if you still write stories in FFN. But i just finished your story the princess and the phantom and i loved it. Will you update?

I just found this story last night, and basically just marathon-read it. I've read a lot of fanfiction, both good and bad, but this is magnificent. You really capture Frances Hodgson Burnett's style, too. If you publish this, I'm buying a copy for sure. I want to write a more coherent review, but there's just so much that I would say and I don't know where to begin. So basically I'll sum it up in five words: I love it. Please continue.

This is amazing and I love it so far! You combined two of my all-time favourite novels, and you accurately capture the characters' "voices". It's almost as if they stepped off the page and into the world of your story. Such a cool crossover and extremely well-written. You've certainly got me hooked.

This whole thing rocks, and good on you for getting this story to an agent! How exciting! Thank you for all that you've written so far, I can't wait to read more!

love following this story because while romantic and fun it is a bsolutely believable for the period in which it is written. In eevery Phantom storyu I have ever written, all Eric ever needed wwas a Sara, not aa christine.

I love these new chapters! I still think that you have a little bit of the Little Princess flavor going on - just enough to stay true to Sara and the other characters from the original story, without making it juvenile in nature. Also, still loving Erik's character! Keep up the great work!

Yaaaay! I'm so happy for you! Oh, please do give us more updates for this! It's absolutely perfect, and I really wanna se more!

Woo hoo, Sara admits her feelings to Erik! And with the image of his deformity fresh in her mind, too.

It will be interesting to see how this might change the dynamics between the two. You have given the impression he would be leaving soon, freeing Sara from the attentions of a "monster," but now that he KNOWS she loves him, I wonder if (hope!) that will change his plans.

I love his observations of her inner strength. She's obviously been projecting her "soldier" persona for him to have picked up on it, though "warrior queen" has a much nicer (and fiercer) ring to it. I wonder what she would think of this appellation?

I also liked your description of Erik's grimace as he pulled back from their kiss. It brought to mind Gerard Butler's expression in the 2004 movie when the Phantom decided to free Christine. (I can't usually picture character's faces as I read, so this was a real plus for me.)

Learning of his dislike for ice was quite amusing. I wonder, of which properties was he speaking: the slipperiness in areas where sure-footedness is key to one's safety (or dignity), the cold, or all of its different aspects?

And woo hoo again that my thought he might have been hiding in the Seminary attic turned out to be correct! (Of course, having guessed multiple scenarios WAS kind of cheating. ;D)

You know, I don't have a problem with the change in your style of writing from "Princess" to something more mature. I had assumed you had done so purposely, to show us Sara's progression from the remnants of childhood - and let's face it, she WAS essentially still that child, just in an adult body - to full on adulthood. Certainly the chapters which featured Erik were not written in the same vein as those featuring Sara, and it would have been odd (to say the least) trying to mix the two styles when they started interacting in a more . . . mature . . . manner. I think your progression to a more adult style is just the right thing for this story.

Two small errors this time:

"He paused, wondering if he should attempt to bring her back across the (? ? ? ?) to the Carmichael attic." (Missing a word or words here. "Treacherous rooftop"?)

". . . hiding him from the sight of others to give him comfort an(d) (not "ant") dignity?"

And congrats on the possibility of publishing this professionally! I'll certainly buy a copy if I can. (Amazon, please?)

Barb

Another wonderful chapter. And I didn't know Burnett had adult fictions. I'll definitely check it out one of these days. Keep up the good work!

I SKIMMED this chapter to get to that moment...

*Swoon*
Did you have to stop RIGHT. THERE.?

Oh my god ! I can't wait for the next chapter.