It was a nice fanfic but i didn't like the idea of winry breaking in the room of al and the other fact that ed just told winry all his backstory just like that instead of telling her to backoff.

Is it wired that I find her pain hilarious...HAHA MORE PAIN (hurls a desk at her and some other objects)

In all of this I think this is a very cool, Ed/Win

Oh my god! I freaking LOVE this story! Thank you so freaking much for writing it!

I hate u for ending it excellent story!

aww. . . adorable! Al, you chose the PERFECT time to wake up!

Riza saying to stay clear of Edward is really out of character; Roy is much more likely, if you ask me. But your writing is interesting so I'll keep reading !

i think this chapter was better than acually called him cute!he is though isnt he:)

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awww that was cute! great fanfic! :)

I love this fic!

That was wonderful :) I loved this so much!

I thouroghly enjoyed this chapter; it was very well written. I commend you on your abundant lack of grammar and spelling errors, which I find to be most refreshing. Thank you!

I've read this story idk how mant times and I still love it!

That was absolutely perfect! (Or should I say imperfect, ((fangirl giggle)) )

That was amazing, good luck with the rest of your writing.

Oh my goodness, I almost fell off of the bed laughing. That was hilarious, the way he walked in as soon as she was making headway.

I'll review again at the end of the story, see you then.