Even though you are making artwork of them please keep writing the story

Aw come on, when is Chapter 4 gonna be up?

Looks like it hasn't been update for about a year.

This seems a really interesting story. I like it a lot and you've done a great job on writing it. Can't wait to read more and update soon. Keep up the good work!

Very good story so far. Keep it up.

You might need a beta for your chapters of this story. I could be yours. It's a good chapter, but it does need work and corrections.

nice 1. good to have you updating again. what else do you got in store for this story?

Do you think, that you could let Ash connect his Pokédex to Izzy's laptop, to not only let Izzy copy down the functions and programs of the Pokédex into his laptop, but install the Digimon Analyzer, along with all featuring programs and functions, into Ash's Pokédex, as well?

Anyway, good luck, and keep updating.

Why did you've to let the story take place prior to that stupid episode with the people giving out unfair treating towards Ash, while Pikachu, May and Max got spoiled around with respect based on undeserved attention. I wished Norman could have avenge the unfair treatment towards Ash, by threatening the inhabitants of the Northern part of Petalburg City, that he won't be Gym Leader in a town, there the people are bullying the traveling outsiders.

Anyway, keep it up!

If you can feature Pokémon Digivolution, then you got my support!

Wow! An awesome chapter! Very good one as well! Keep up the great work!

I hope Ash wakes up from fainting. Please update soon!

I just hope Ash find out whats going on on the next chapter.

Looks like is Ash Ketchum to the rescue, but I gota bad feeling that is a booby trap.

Please continue.

u must finish it! good storie by the way.