Great chapter and I see Yoshi and Sheila have finally gotten married. I guess he'll be a little busy that night (cough cough) but that's beside the point! They have finally taken back the kingdom and it seems that another plot is being formed yet again to take over the world. I wonder, if any of the rulers finally realize that they fail every time, what would they do? Oh, I guess what you can do for Lex and Pyra to get back home is to somehow open that portal. I kinda forgot myself and I'm going to have to check my e-mails. Still, good job and keep it up.

Lex out

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a LONG time, but I've been too damn busy with school projects. With school almost ending, they load a bunch of crap on us. Anyway, great chapter. I laughed when I read how fast Magnus died. He retreated basically just to die in five seconds, lol. Niyoshi is now gone as well and it seems all is left is to take care of the darker Guardian of Chaos, (if I'm correct) nice job and I hope the next chapter is just as interesting.

Oh, by the way, I think I mentioned in the message I sent you that I would use Chris in the Freedom Fighters series. It turns out that I (once AGAIN!) have found stronger connections to things that I can use and blah blah blah. Even though I find it very interesting and fun, it kinda gets aggravating after you come up with an original idea and then new and better ones pop up. But you don't know where to use your old ones. Oh well, this way you can see who actually came from what in the next Lex Prower series that I make. Just send me some info and whatever else I need on Chris. (Mainly the fact how he can explain how he lost his powers and stuff like that and where his original team went, or maybe he just didn't meet them yet or something) I know too long, but hey, it's worth it.

Lex out

Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile, but I had been a bit busy as well. I found the disk at the school I attend after I came back from Spring Break. Nice chapter by the way. It seems Cassandra might be supportive, but won't go too far if it's not necessary. Keep it up and I can't wait for the next one.

Lex out

Excellent job with the chapter. The Othean Yoshis are fighting back, which causes some relief for Team Chaos. But I would never believe that Leon was ever in love with someone. I just don't see it happening. But what's alls well ends well. Nice chapter and keep it coming!

Lex out

That was indeed an interesting chapter. It was actually worth the wait. It seems the final battle is so close, yet so far. The two chaos swords are finally about to clash and then the team will have to fight for their lives. Nice description with the diamond and Yoshi by the way. The Lex and Pyra bit was perfect. They have their little moments and realize things little by little. But like I said before, the chapter was worth the wait. I'm almost through with the chapter for my next series, it's just I realized that I have to rewrite the whole three series after that one, so there really was no point in making them already. (Clumsy me) Oh well, nice chapter and keep it up!

Lex out

Nice work. Looks like it pays to not be precautious. Niyoshi better think quick. Yoshi is extremely lucky that Chris made a chaos energy that could reverse something like that. They seem to get closer to the worst throwdown ever. This one is going to be a big war.

Lex out

Great chapter! It's going to take a lot to take this guy down. No matter how many times they take down their enemy, it seems like they keep coming back. Those stupid soldiers should have just let him gone through, what a stupid idea to attack the Demon Yoshi. I guess they had just woken up or something. Still, another sweet chapter and it's getting better every time. Keep it up!

Lex out

Great chapter! I finally caught up with everything and all of it was pretty good. The war is about to start and I'm looking for a good battle. There were great action scenes in this one, and it seems you get better every time. I wonder how a castle of pure diamond would look like. And to tell you the truth, if the city looks like how I think it does, then your about to be surprised with great irony in my next chapter of Passion. I thought of the idea after watching Sonic the Hedgehog: The Movie this weekend on tape, and something on that movie caught my attention. If you haven't seen it, then that sucks. But if you have, then I'm sure you will recognize it.

Lex out

Nice chapter, Leon heads towards Othea, magic energy can control just about anything, and Chris gets jumped by crazy Yoshis that pop out of trees... a pretty typical and normal day. I see you made this in a kinda rush though and you didn't get to proof read it. There are a moderate amounts of typos in here, but I was able to decifer them. Still, great chapter.

I see your point about the review thing. I have a lot of hits on that new Passion series that I'm writing, but I barely have any reviews. Sometimes a writer is looking for at least some feedback to get his hopes up on what to do. Even if it is flames, at least the person took some time to write something. Not that I need it, I just get discouraged sometimes and don't really write the next chapter as fast as I can because I don't think not that many people are looking forward to it. Whenever I read something, I always review it, no matter what. If it took my time to read it, then it should take my time to review it. Oh well, on to the next chapter. Good job so far!

Lex out

Nice start off for a story. Sheila is queen of Yoshi Island, Leon comes back from the dead after Boshi believes he will become powerful... I wonder, how long did it take for him to get that much men? It seems like it only takes him a few minutes of convincing and then everybody serves the dark lord. It happens everytime and it's kinda funny. I wonder how this will turn out.

Lex out