I think SCP-423 just made a cameo.

This story was amazing. Stories are more entertaining when the characters are not acting like themselves.

Now this is a nice Christmas fanfiction, I enjoy the fact that this story is more romantic than other stories. Thank you for the great work.

Ruto Kuntai

naisu asuka ken shinji hanashi

I loved the OOCness! This is just the type of story I need to read before going to bed! Great job on the details. I'll be reading more from you _~ (

This was a very good story, if not a little OOC. But not too much, Asuka was very good in this story, as much of the OOCness comes from Shinji.

This was a great story even if the characters were kinda OC but dang! 4 years? that's crazy! Good story though, liked it!

that was kickass

Cartmen: kickass, Kyle: woah dude, Stan: cool, Kenny: booly shhitt (holy shit)

You know that this could be made into a full length fanfic. You said that you have other stories. Why not try to mold them to this story and make a longer fic? I hope you take my advice. I would like to see this relationship and fanfic become an awesome piece to read. I hope you take my advice, keep up the good work.

Sweet

*crawling like a man in the desert* must find dentist... too...many...cavities! lol, seriously though i like it, and i hope to see more sometime.

ikari shinji

Aww, I love this Waffy Romances.

They R kinda occ, but that's totally normal after

two years.

Badass. That's all that can be said.

Only thing to say is "AWE!"

Yea, figures Shinji would wait that long.