Awwwww... So cute! It should totally have gone down this way in the show!

If only that had actually happened in the anime in the second season. I wish. Love it amazing work. And so cute.

interesting
what I can say

Telling the story from the baby's point of view is daring and great, but he does come off a just a little too mature at times. I do like the fact that the adults are oblivious and that the story conveys just the right touch of hope. I wish this was what had actually happened, as it would have broken up what was ultimately a depressing season.

I thought you were insane putting a story into a baby's point of view. But it was genius! It kind of reminded me of the song "Matchmaker" from Mulan and a cupid Look Who's Talking! :)

its so cute! I love it!

Great one-shot. I definitely loved this ending. Now when I watch the episode, I'll just imagine that this is what really happened...because Darien breaks my heart. (

o my god I loved this story super cute

that was a cute story. I didn't really see it as Jordan trying to get them together in the anime.

This was fantastic!

loved reading and re-reading this story several times _

well it sure makes you wish the episode happened the way you wrote it I'll tell you that and Jordan was to die for I laughed my head of at some of the things he sed,did or thoth.

aww Jordan is so cute great story

Aw! That was PERFECT! Pure romantic fluffy BLISS, with humor mixed in. LOVE it. :D