Bwahahahaha

This is what I live for in life. I love love love the family dynamic. :)

can you do a chapter where peter goes overprotective brother mode for a suitor of lucy? I believe lucy would have had her share of suitors. And I love lucy and peter sibling bonding a Iot.

Oh that was beautiful. I could practically hear the smack!
:) It's good to hear from you. I was ever so thrilled that your
name popped up in my notices. I hope all finds you well.

Enjoyed your story.

I see this has taken you 12 yaers to finish... But at least you got there in the end! Well done for persevering! This was a nice little story and a bit of a laugh.

Lol, great story.

Lol

Aww, now that was cute!

I thought it was adorable seeing Edmund being childish and throwing rocks at the Prince and then protective older, brother Peter is always a good plus! It's adorable how protective Peter can be. Ahh, I kind of wished that we could see the exchange between Peter and the Prince and see what kind of 'flowery' words Peter used to dissuade Susan's suitors. Oh, well.

Amazing fic! Love it!

Awwww XD

xD This was funny. Write another one.

Awww, that was so sweet! I love imagining Peter as a protective older brother, and this was just adorable! The 'big brother' talk with the Prince's arm twisted behind his back was hilarious! I loved it! Good job!

This is great! You did a wonderful job.

funny real humor...haha peter

I loved it, you really got the characters down! :D