During this crazy times I found myself reading and looking for Twilight fanfics in order to keep me sane. During this 2 months of coronavirus lockdown I have read tons and tons of fics. Some bad, some regular, some good. But this I just read... It was the first fanfic that I can surely say is way way waaaaay much better than the real books. Don’t get me wrong, I love the books. But I also hated a lot of the drama and the holes in the original story. But this story that you created many years ago is amazing. I am grateful for the bad ass heroe that Bella turned out to be. I fell in love with all the interactions and pieces of normal life that we never got a chance to see in the real story. The plot! This fanfic has an original plot! Just thank you for creating this and sharing it. I hope that you are still writing. I’m sending you love and good vibes.

Why even bother having that conversation about the dream. Bella cant tell if they are inside or out, if its day or night...LMFAO. Bitch is totally useless. How is she even sure that it was her and Edward in the dream? I mean she cant tell anything else.

Please tell me that HUMAN Bella is not having dreams about the future. It would be pretty fucking weird for Bella to not only have POWERS whilst human but also have the same damn power that Alice has!

Well, there were a lot of differences in this one. Some were okay, some were weird, and some were disappointing. You started before Breaking Dawn, so there was a lot that happened that you didn't know yet.

Bellas last meal was fucking weird. First up was eggs and toast? AS A LAST MEAL?

That shouldn't have even made the list!

This has all felt like filler, where is the meat?

No really, its chapter seven already when are you gonna start with a real plot?

That carethat Edward bought Bella? WTF? Bella would never want to drive that hideous piece of shit and I don't see him picking that ugly ass car out for her.

You know what I cant stand? When writers and I use that term loosely put themselves in the story by brand dropping. Or they put off their own wants as the characters even though it just doesn't fit.

Like bella gives one fuck about louis viwhatever luggage. NO ONE CARES

Weird how someone is hunting bella, planning to kill her and COMING from the south. But bella thinks its a great idea to go SOUTH to Arizona. Fucking morons.

Who the fuck are these vampires? And the humans know about them? I'm sure Aro will just love that.

AND I guess theres no problem anymore, they have a vamp that can make people do whatever he wants. BAM DONE

All they have to do is stick with him and he can get that other vampire to kill himself.

It was great. Thank you for the wonderful story

Considering English isn't your first language this story is absolutely amazing so far.

I like your writing! But I found this chapter confusing. Is this after they encounter James/Victoria/Laurent, and the ballet studio? I assume that's why her leg is broken. But she broke that in the spring of the previous school year. It would be healed by the time school restarted in the fall. The summary and the 1st chapter don't specify what's going on. It almost feels like a 1st chapter is missing.

Oh well, maybe I'll figure out as I read.

Thoroughly loved it! Would've appreciated more fluff though, but still enjoyed it! Great job :)

I like it! There were a few OOC (Out Of Character) moments but overall it was great!

Wow... I have no words