Nice version of an earlier chance to get together. Good job of having them work things through.

Loved it! ! Awesome story!

Thanks for a fantastic piece! I loved it!

Cute story, but just check all your spelling, wording, and grammar in all the chapters.

Very well written. Do another one!

great job

I love it! Before I had read halfway through it I knew I just loved this story. It's told in an excellent manner and flows so well.

The small spelling mistakes and time errors are easily overlooked and doesn't really disturb the reading much. This story deserves to be read from start to finish.

And now my eyes have been screaming at me to sleep for at least five chapters, so I better end my review.

Very well done. :D

Love Lora

this is a work of art keep writing you have got the skills lady

OH I LOVE THIS STORY! AWESOME JOB!

AMAZING! Not sure why, but I started crying I was so happy for them! I loved the way you had Luke just walk up to her and kiss her, so sweet! You have to write more stories like this one! I've read it at least five times through, and i'm still not tired of it! Great Job!

I loved how you wrote Mara and Luke in this story. Great story and I would never have guessed English was not your native tongue.

that was amazing !

the character dialogue was perfect and the story line was awesome :)

write moree, your a great writer :)

may the force be with you ! ]]

MM,

Thank you so much for your story. I was riveted to it from the beginning to the end. Truly outstanding. I rate it a 10.

I am also in awe that English is not your native language. I found very few flaws or wrong words in your chapters. You did an excellent job in editing. Those few I found would be easily corrected. In fact, I found far fewer errors than in most of the fan fiction I have read.

Again, my thanks and compliments to you for a truly outstanding story.

Sue

This is a great story for it to be your first fic. Your command on English is great. Funny story behind that though, I'm learning spanish, so maybe we could do like a tag team story. That would be fun.

Esta lo estupendo...

I think I said that right...

haha, I'm not quite sure.

Anywhoo, great story. definitely going on my favorites list.

this is a really gret story, sweet but not sloppy and it manages to stay true to thw characters as well. i hope you keep writting in the future and thanks for a great fic!