I love everyone's (over)protective reactions to Youko :)

A very enjoyable read. :)

Oh wow I love this ending it's awesome!

they're going to have a baby!

Loved the story, can't wait to read the next story:) Keep up the good work! xx

sequel

i loved the ending! it was so cute and i thought it fit so well! i have loved this story and thoroughly enjoy reading your work! (as you may be able to tell as this is the third of your stories i have read today)

i hope you continue to exccel with your writing and though there are a few mistakes like typo's and whatnot it was a extreamly enjoyable read!

Cute!

A very fun & cute story. _ Interesting reading. I always enjoy a flirting Youko. Yoko. Whatever spelling. _

I'm still a bit confused about what happened to Sango, though not why she or her reincarnation were not called upon for the situation. Also I'm glad Kazuma was mentioned though not involved, poor dear. *giggles* He'll be upset about that I'm sure.

You're twist on Kagome's story history was quick and dispersed so sometimes it was quite confusing to grasp -especially when it was explained that she was training already BEFORE shattering the jewel.

Very interesting 'splitting' Shuchi (again with the debatable 'English' spellings) and Youko. Nice to not waste their hotness. ;) It does make me wonder if the lifetime of growth & binding had any residual affects upon Shuchi. Like.. is he a pure, boring ningen now or does he retain any of the powers he used before? Does his intellect -which was sharpened with Youko's years of experience- alter any? There could be lots of variations, and lots of life changes other than simply having Youko's 'voice' gone from his head.

On a side-note, I hope Yusuke & Keiko get back together. *pouts* Always sad when she's upset with him.

hm... there was more I intended to say but it went away. *shrugs & grins* Oh well. Onto critique mode. Watch the word errors/mixes; things like your/you're, they're/their/there. I remember spotting more than a few, though not so many that they pulled too badly from the story. Other things could be more descriptive. The notion of your villains was great... but the showdown was ... well a bit of a letdown. Mostly I think because no mental image formed of the opponents. I could see facial expressions -which were awesome! _ -but little else. Also I would have been interested to see some confrontation -verbal, not battle- with the unwilling doctor (whatever) who actually did the experiments. If only because it would tie up loose ends and story-wise probably help the survivors. I don't know... just feels like a ball was dropped there or the tale was rushed or something. Can't quite place my finger on it.

All in all I really enjoyed it! _ Thanks for writing!

It was good but still it's sad how the two didn't really stay in touch with each other (Yoko and Kurama)Still it was very good.

two words...

if you dont wanna read, dont read it u.u

The Two Ultimate Words ahead ~

LOVED IT!

LOVED IT!

LOVED IT!

LOVED IT!

No Adictional Ultimate Coments. XD

bye

The ending was cool i liked it.I just wish there was a little more fluff but i loved the storie anyways.I haven't read the first one its and kag and kur pairing to i bet?

wow this was good is there going to be a sequal

I really like your story so far. I lone to read fics with Kagome and Kurama.

you have my attention...