| Reviews for Embers |
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Kate Pendragon chapter 2 . 2/29/2012 Great so far! ~Kate |
midlagdobsessn chapter 1 . 7/1/2006 Squish, I hope you haven't given up on Embers :-( MAO |
Ayesha56 chapter 4 . 3/29/2006 I initially read this chapter on the WB Board, but from this version, it looks as if you edited it to perfection! Honestly, squish, this is wonderful! I'm so enjoying it! Your descriptions are so eloquent they are almost poetic - and so exact! Please keep it coming! |
solaris1012 chapter 4 . 3/22/2006 I liked you story a lot. I do have my suspicions :D. it is wonderfull. keep it up |
ErikMySweet chapter 4 . 3/18/2006 aside from loving music-she luvs the phantom ! ah! YAY! perhaps an E/C phic? i'm liking this |
Froody chapter 4 . 3/18/2006 I'm sorry, I'm sorry, it's me again. :) WOW. I am humbled. Why are you wasting your magnificent literary talents on phanphic? Okay, I understand why, sure, but you deserve so many more reviews... were all the chapters put out at once? I love music too. :) |
Froody chapter 3 . 3/18/2006 "And they sang; their tiny, piccolo voices rose up in youthful harmony and filled the air with sweet, untainted sound." Bravo, bravo indeed. It may please you to know that I am very jealous of your fantastic description. :) Yes, it's me again, reviewing so soon. But you can't blame me, surely. Okay, I'm not a big fan of R/C but I have never seen it written so masterfully- I mean, Raoul bashing is fun and all, but this is just- beautiful. |
Froody chapter 2 . 3/18/2006 Aw! Okay, I know I still have like another two chapters to read, but... WOW! I am so full of sweet fluffiness... Thankyou. :) |
Tangerine-Tangerine chapter 4 . 3/18/2006 Hey there squish97! This story is really amazing! The way you've written it just flows together so very very nicely. Another thing I like about this is, you don't bash Raoul, and you don't make him evil. You show that Christine loves the Phantom, and yet you show that she loves Raoul too. Not many fics do that, so I applaud you on keeping so well in character. This is really such an awesome story, and I really hope that you write more soon. |
goodbye1 chapter 3 . 3/9/2006 O Em Gee!This is so good!You must update soon! |
nightsmusic chapter 3 . 3/9/2006 squishy! What a delight! I thought I'd read a little of this before and wondered where it had disappeared to. Now you see though, you have a commitment to continue... |
Ayesha56 chapter 3 . 3/9/2006 squish - I read all three chapters and I LOVE this story! "And while Raoul may not have known it, the presence of music in their lives was only the fuel which started the fireā¦" What a cliffhanger! Beautifully scripted, very inspiring... Please continue! How could you have let this little treasure sit dormant for so long? |
Kat097 chapter 3 . 3/9/2006 What a marvellous story! I bet you had a damn good beta _~ Nudgenudgewinkwink. |
Sue Raven chapter 3 . 3/8/2006 What presently draws me to your story is your use of language. It's very expressive. Example: "Yes, this shadow would always hover threateningly, a tweaked thread on the tapestry of their existence." Also, you're taking your time setting up your story, which will give it a strong backbone. |
Sue Raven chapter 2 . 3/7/2006 OK, we've gone over the familiar territory, and you did a nice job. Now for the new part. I look forward to it. |