I like it so far. Just remember "if you are going to take a Jedi Padawan. Make sure the Master is dead."

What a great ending!

Good job. I thought the last chapter was really good and I enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing!

Oh... My... Gosh... I cant describe how beautiful and heartbreaking this story was! Its amazing! So so so good! I love the jedi apprentice series! I loved your version! Well done!
May the force be with you
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I read all of your chapters as fast as i could, i just couldn't wait to see what happens next! U did an amazing job and i absolutely loved it! Keep up the good work!

I read this story ages ago, and recently I have begun to reread the Jedi Apprentice series (which I haven't touched in nearly eight years). I actively sought out this particular fic because I remembered it, I remembered loving it and even though this time through, I knew the ending, i still found it enjoyable.

I hope you continue to write.

Well you had me hooked the entire story and I loved every minute of it. Sometimes it was hard for me to see Obi-Wan so, unlike himself but yet it was perfect for the bonding that you did so wonderfully. I loved this and I think this should be what happened in the book. Great job and hope to see more amazing things from you! See ya and May the Force be with you! ;)

"I splashed Master Yoda?"

That was hilarious! Just Obi-Wan's pure horror at that made me laugh so hard. Great chapter!

"you are still with the light."

Awwwwwww

Oh-ho! It was Xanatos! HAHA I knew it! Great chapter, now if you'll excuse me I need to go read the rest of the story and see what other evil you have come up with! ;)

I agree, BRUCK IS EVIL! His master is Xanatos (sp?) isn't it! I will just go read the rest to find out huh?

This was a great story! I loved it!

this story is epically cool. I love how well you portrayed qui-gon, and Obi's confusion over some of his master's reactions. man i am a sucker for character fics XD i look forward to reading more from you.

and "Force Tumor"? you should totally copyright that XD

loved, loved, loved this story! That was great! I love Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan's relationship. What a great ending. ~Obi's Mom

OK, I found this story today, and I am hooked with perpetual mistiness in my eyes. I also enjoyed the original book this is based on, and I am enjoying your version of it. Poor Obi-Wan, I hope his memories can be restored, but I'm enjoying the angsty journey on the way. (sniff)..Even Adi started tearing up..(sniff, sniff) good job..~Obi's Mom.