it was good even though i have no idea who the characters are i thought up my own faces and yes Johnny shall be my squishy and i will call him squishy (Depp) neways i really liked your poem and the last quote very cool and really emotional great job ash i hope you let me read the next chapter and tell you all the spelling mistakes in that one lol

see you at work

Nads

TYSON YOU IDEOT!I HOPE YOU DIE! xD oaky i dont do that88(Anime sweat drop)

Aw the kiss.. its was so..so HEartWArming -

and is this a real play to?:O

awsome story

cant wait till the next chapter

OMG I totaly love your story! Please continue!

hey this is really good! i like the actual characters, although kai seemed ooc in the play. even though it was only acting. tyson's an ass, and im glad you showed that. do you hate him too? i hope so, i might start a 'WE HATE TYSON' club. you likey?

sorry, im just completely nuts. im sure itr was very hard for you to guess that, huh~? well done, pretty please update soon, naioka1992 - xoxo

Love your story. I'm sorry to say one of my stories has a similar idea to your black and white Dranzer. I wrote it and submitted it to the story before i read your third chapt. Keep writing your story though i want to know what happens.

Okay, that was a little sudden...I mean you did good not dropping any hints that AJ's father was Boris, and for that, I must give you props

OMG ! That was totally awesome when AJ destroyed the beydish and shredded Dragoon. O.O. Anyway, update soon !

What a nice story. Enjoyed reading it. Especially the play part. You go AJ ! Anyway, update soon !

'ello, I aboutsoloutly LOVE this story! SO you better update soon! Because I reviewed! So you have to update! Fair exchange!

I LOVED IT! write more please!