So I have read this story and what I see is you have a lot of content that needs not be here, make it a smaller story and keep the characters to a minimum as it will work that way. also, what is the true ending of it?

Ron in bed with his multiracial harem

Like Ron being with women of every race

wow

Why didn't they just take the sword with them? Or put it in a safe place. Or replace with a fake that has a tracking chip implanted. Though I've asked myself that about the show as well.

I've been enjoying the story a lot so far. I think you've captured the feel of the characters rather well.

There have been a few spelling mistakes here and there, like using "to" instead of "too" and sometimes questions aren't punctuated correctly.

You confused two of the cheerleaders. Marcella is the one that looks similar to Hope, not Liz. You can check the Kim Possible wikia article for Middleton High School cheerleaders. Though it is rather late to point that out now.

Only 240 chapters left to read.

It is a little unclear from reading the chapter if Zita was together with the photographer or their daughter.

thanks

thanks

Very Nice.

very nice.

very nice

nice..

nice.

Nice!

Nice..