| Reviews for Invasion |
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  Rocker on chapter 7 . 1/31/2017 Hopefully the conclusion will be good, and hopefully it was just a big misunderstanding with those guys. |
| Rocker on chapter 5 . 12/22/2016 Hope that they find the Omnitrix. Also, do the aliens have the Omnitrix symbol on them? That would be interesting to know. |
| Rocker on chapter 3 . 12/22/2016 Nice chapter, hope the rest are as good. Perhaps you could give a reason why his aliens are appearing and disappearing? Also, isn't Ghostfreak kinda evil? Eh, maybe not in whatever universe you made here. |
| Rocker on chapter 2 . 12/22/2016 You're southern, aren't you? Also, I would guess Ben's consciousness was split into his various alien forms(including his human form!), and now he's on some planet inside the Omnitrix. Eh, weirder things have happened in that show. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/14/2016 I love this story! It's hard to find quality Ben 10 fanfiction that isn't about romance or something. I wish you'd continue with this, since with Siren getting away and all and you hinting at a sequel as she did so. But since this was 2007 I'd think that would be really unlikely... Still, you have a lot of skill as writer, so keep writing because your work is appreciated! |
 MugetsuPipefox chapter 1 . 8/3/2014 I actually read this story a while ago and was surprised when I decided to re-read it that it wasn't in my favs or follows. (A mistake which has been corrected). So glad I found it again! I love this story w Beautifully written :3 |
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 8 . 6/28/2013 Great job! Congratulations on reaching the end! It was a great story and you ended it well. So she got away...she'd better be prepared for a butt-whooping if she ever comes back! XD |
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 5 . 6/27/2013 Your story is super awesome! Great job so far! |
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 3 . 6/27/2013 It makes me so happy to see a nice Ghostfreak who's not trying to take over everything. Great chapter! |
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 2 . 6/27/2013 I love stories where Ben interacts with his aliens! *looks at you with adoration* But why did they disappear? Really good! |
| vampyregirl256 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012 AMAZING! I love it and cant wait for the next chapter. WHOO! XD |
| xXCHAZYWOOXx chapter 8 . 11/28/2009 Just so you know. I love you. |
| LucasVN chapter 8 . 7/11/2009 The story seemed confused at the very beginning, but what followed is one for the recommended reading list of Ben 10 fics. Well thought out; it's a captivating story. Only problem is the constant misspellings, but the plot makes up for it. 4 3/4 stars! |
| Lunan chapter 8 . 4/19/2008 Aww, that ending just makes me go all fuzzy and warm inside! Other than that I liked this story, interesting plot, good delivery, and most importantly, it actually has command of proper English! This one goes into my favorites list. Keep up the good writing! Lunan |
| Expendable-Mongrel chapter 8 . 1/22/2008 Sorry for the very late review. This story was awesome, You kept them in character nicely, I thought. Great work. |
