I just finished reading your story and it is one of the saddest things I have ever read! Please continue it!

Is it sad that I LIKE the idea of Hyde and Kelso fighting over Eric? I love stoires where Hyde is protective over eric...it makes me squee lol

I like this story, it's smutty and sweet.

awwwwwwwwwwwww nooooooo why did you leave eric behond hyde whhhhyyyyyyyy!

I was checking out your beta profile, and I was intrigued. I've got an Eric/Hyde story going that i wouldn't mind a beta for. So, I decided that since you seemed to be driven by sentence structure and whatnot, I would come check it out.

So, here's my problem after reading only a few lines. You do seem to rotate how sentences begin and end. However, it feels almost forced, like you go back through after the fact that purposely change it. It doesn't feel natural. If anything, it reads overprocessed.

It's the sort of thing you get from reading a poem that just won't end. You do make lovely use of grammatical devices like repetition and parallelism and blah blah blah, but that doesn't help if I'm bored reading the story.

I think this chapter alone borders- no, tramples on- the line of reality and easily crosses over purely fandom story lines.

Good luck in the future!

Aw, Hyde&Eric are so cute.

But, gah, the ending was so sad.

It was very beautifully written though, good job!

-Amy (:

Emotional. Incredible. Heartbreaking. Amazing...Simply Amazing

. . . . -sob-

hey are u gay? i had a friend that was guy, when i lived in catholic up there so the other boys were a utter bastard to him sometimes, though he was really nice.

and better than them at :)

LOVE IT! So emo and hot and cute all at once, I LOVED IT! Adding to favs!

Wow, how did I miss this?

So sad...

I love the idea of a love triangle between Eric, Kelso, and Hyde.

Awesome fic.

Aww, i absolutely loved it. It was so sad yet beautiful.

For the first time in a while, I cried for a fic and 'Ghost Of You' played in my head. AND I HATE MY CHEM. This was so sad and riveting that I played something I hate in my head. And that's a good thing. Darn you Ashton-I mean, Kelso.

I don't know how I missed this. What a cool story! Too sad, needs continuation - maybe a year or two later Hyde comes back? Hm ... hm ... well? :)

The first chapter was so HAWT! The second was too sweet and cute for words. The third was so SAD! I LOVED the entire thing! Kelso's a jerk. He's the one who had sex with Eric, not Hyde. Well... I am off to read more, no doubt fabulous, stories by the genius that is you! _

this is very good so far. i like it. it was very well writen and you did a great job. cant wait to find out where it goes from here.