Awesome continuation of the other storyline!

I have read the stories of this and have to say its good, you should continue it maybe? Granted I am known for long times between updates myself. One thing wrong I saw here though. And forgive me if I read it wrong. But Senator Clark seems to have way too much power. Yes in the show it showed he had support from the shadows, though I do not think Mordens and Sheridans wife ship had been lost on Zahdum yet. But as Captain Sheridan said when Nightwatch tried to take over B5. "A Governor can not give you a direct order, a Senator can not give you a direct order. Orders must come from with in the military. Starting with the Commander and Chief, the Joint Chiefs of Staff... and down to your own superior officer."

Please continue the story. It is really good.

When are you going to write some more chapter's?

This is probably long long dead, but if you ever desire to come back to it I for one really was looking foreword to Asgard vs Vorlon action. I can't see the Asgard being happy with what they or the Shadows have done in this universe, and while not ascended, as the Vorlons seem to kinda be in the same way that Anubis was, they should be able to take on most of what the Vorlons can do, and it would be epic.

I like this story, wish you had finished it.

this has been a great story. I hope the idea to finish this story attacks you.

i like it even if i am little disappointed that you stooped writing it. God read.

Good Work

I have no clue at all about Babylon 5 but I really enjoyed this story you really brought all the varied parties to life. My earlier reviews pointed out all the little niggles I had with this story, slightly out of place and repetitive profanity, some underuse of technology, the origins of some of the SG technology slightly muddled but all in all these were minor issues there was little to critique. This story was really well written and thought out and seemed to be just getting into the Babylon universe side of things. Unravelling mysteries of the two universes. But it has also suddenly ended and with 5 years of no updates I can assume this story is abandoned.

I'll be following just in case. Great story.

The Vree relation was pretty exciting.

Why don't Alliance capital ships have missiles? Why would they fare worse now than when they didn't have ECM?

How did the Psi-corps get to the 302 before the incredibly fast Achilles with its incredibly advanced sensors?

Why would anyone believe that all races werre out to get them when the Centauri already had the opportunity to destroy or enslave humanity when they encountered them on pre-interstellar earth?

Rejecting the League's assistance could well drive them to attack the Alliance. It would have been simpler to allow League ships to form up with Alliance ships in offensive and defensive fleets. There is still no guarantee that humanity would survive the war with the minbari, why antagonize the League?

Just read Book 1 and Book 2. It was a good read. I hope you continue the story.

please tell me you're still working on the continuation of this story. you are a very good writer, the way you've crossed Stargate with Babylon 5 is a masterpiece. please don't leave this unfinished like a lot of writers do. if you need any help finishing this story feel free to contact me at