D: Why did you discontinue it?

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What is the POINT of putting naruto on team 7 AGAIN? Everyone KNOWS this team is fundamentally flawed.. It SUCKS! Hell I (and several others) call it "team suicide"... It has NOTHING good going for it.. NOTHING... This was the 3rds SECOND screw up... and in this one at least, Naruto is FAR better then in canon... and kiba was beaten by a FART of all things, I'm pretty sure that makes HIM dead-last. Think about it in a real fight? Someone accidentally "toots" and then can easily KNIFE HIM IN THE HEART? what kinda lame-ass fighter is that? (HOW DID HE EVEN GRADUATE?)

So we're doing the mizuki thing AGAIN! Which means he'll probably be teamed with the dipshit-duo AGAIN! *sigh* You ever think that whole "epic" mizuki thing was ONLY to tell him about the fox.. and sense he's been under the care of said fox for like 4 years then it MEANS NOTHING now... He's ALREADY been in the hokage's secret library.. so he should ALREADY know the shadow clone... and have hundreds if not THOUSANDS of years of experience using it! It becomes very SILLY to do CANON events when clearly NOTHING IS CANON... His failing the graduation, his teamed up in team 7.. both those events MAKE NO SENSE with this timeline... Of course WITHOUT him, sasuke is PROBABLY gonna be murdered on his first mission outside of leaf... He's too WEAK for how cocky he is.. Not only that but his eyes put a GIGANTIC bulls-eye on his back. One which I don't think he fully UNDERSTANDS.. He HAD a clan to protect him from bloodline-hunters.. that doesn't exist anymore. If kumo sent a nin into their VERY village to kidnap hinata from her BED, what do you think they'd do to get the LAST pair of sharringan? (especially from a WEAK boy who THINKS he isn't!).. What about IWA?.. Or waterfall?.. ANY OF THOSE.. The third thinks NARUTO might have enemies because of his father?... ROFL... and as far as "hiding" sasuke.. 1.. do you think he would allow it? (ego, he's cocky as hell)... and 2. you can't hide a NINJA that's always going out on missions and wants to participate in the chunnin exams (where EVERYONE comes)..

Finally the thing that TRIPS up a LOT of authors... "I could use kage bushin but Irukia might get suspicious"... what exactly is THE POINT of having power if you never USE IT?! SOMEONE IS ALWAYS going to get suspicious unless you LEAVE NO WITNESSES.. but since this isn't a DARK NARUTO fic.. I assume you don't wanna do that... Having power but never using it.. is EXACTLY the same as having NO POWER. At some POINT.. you gotta just say "fuck it" and not give a damn what others think... He's got two friends (lee and hinata) that like him, so who CARES what others do?.. (plus the third, Hiashi, kyuubi, the ichirakus).. So why hide ANYTHING?.. yeah the villagers would dislike it.. SO WHAT? THEY ALREADY HATE HIM... what, they are gonna hate him MORE?... YEAH GOOD LUCK WITH THAT. Being TIGHT-LIPPED about what you can do is NOT the same as "gimping" yourself. The difference? DO what you really CAN do.. and when the questions come... THEN SHUT YOUR MOUTH... (after all NOBODY is gonna get answers from going in his head, with the kyuubi feasting on anyone's soul dumb enough to try)... Truth serum wouldn't work on him, kyuubi would BURN IT OUT.. Or he just says "clan secret" (found out about his parents in chapter 1 remember?)... and lets them STEW IN THEIR OWN FRUSTRATION. OTHERWISE.. he can POP the whole can of worms of all konoha's dirty little deeds with the Uzumaki clan, and all the other dirty little laundry that the third and the elders DON'T WANT KNOWN.(like YES, YES it WAS the uchiha's fault that the kyuubi attacked)

ACTUALLY, the kyuubi can shoot lasers from it's tails.. THROW tornadoes... breath fire(hot enough to drill through a MOON), fire three different kinds of "beast balls", create entire oceans and tsunamis on a whim, has a sonic roar that can FLATTEN A VILLAGE... Technically has "ripping gale palm" and "tailed-beast ripping palm".. and ALL the knowledge of sealing that BOTH mito and kushina possessed. (so EXTREMELY extensive).. While NONE of these are EXACTLY ninjutsu per say... and most definitely NOT a tai-jutsu form... I think it's kinda easy to see that it's got PLENTY to teach him. (and ALL of this is CANON!.. not from fics)

Also what's the POINT of the gravity weights? Other then a joke that gets boring rather quickly?.. It's already been said, that it doesn't matter how much the gravity increases, his WOLF BODY would shurg it off like it didn't exist.. Also the upping the weights was SUPPOSED to help him before his first transformation.. That's over.. so what's the point? His WOLF-SOUL is gonna keep making him stronger and faster WITHOUT the weights.. Now it's just silly. It works for Rock Lee and Gai.. but THAT'S ALL THEY HAVE.. They gotta use such silly methods.. because they can't DO anything else. To have naruto just kicking and punching his way through everything is stupid... He can TWITCH a clawed finger and pretty much put a HOLE in fire country! Also since the fox is HELPING (instead of going against naruto, or SLEEPING) naruto why CAN'T he do bunshin?.. If the fox is good at illusions (as you JUST SAID).. then NO BIG DEAL...Also it's FOUR YEARS later.. that's FOUR YEARS OF TRANSFORMATIONS at least 3 a month.. every month.. so that's 144 transformations... I'm pretty sure he'd get a handle on his chakra by then.. ALSO the kyuubi had started him on water-walking.. that's not covered in canon until WWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAY later... so a simple illusion jutsu.. SHOULD be a piece of cake.

You know if you looked up the TERM "fake friend" I think sasuke has his picture there! He ONLY makes friends so he has "measuring sticks" to see how far he's come.. OH and yeah, he reads that he has to "kill his best friend" to gain eyes like Itachi... so yeah, best to stay far far far away from that little shit-stain... Seriously, why have these two friends AT ALL?.. it makes no POINT... In canon naruto was a weakling(at first)... and sasuke made a good foil but here (and most fanfics) he's NOT and doesn't have a use for sasuke.. In fact, sasuke's ENTIRE existence becomes MOOT, consequential, or MEANINGLESS... So what if he kills itachi OR doesn't.. does that affect ANYTHING? NO.. Does it matter on the GRAND SCALE?.. NO... Will he stop AFTER itachi.. NO... People like that ALWAYS have to have SOMETHING(ONE) to hate, they HAVE too, otherwise their existence is NOTHING(hate is their CRACK).. They USUALLY end up dead at the hands of their newest target.. or gunned down by cops. You know the type.. Despoits, terrorists, serial killers, genocidal maniacs.. Yes I put sasuke right in there.. he's got ALL the behavioral markings... He is coo-coo for coco-puffs! NOT AT ALL WHAT I WOULD CONSIDER a friend. and DEFINITELY a bad "contact" to have if your gunning to be the next kage.

"Why wasn't I told"? That's easy.. the sandime is an IMBECILE..."His father had too many enemies"?.. SO WHAT? One LOOK at him is all ANYONE from another village needs to make the connection... That and EVERYBODY with more then "split-pea soup" between their ears knows that EVERY jinchuriki is connected with the kages of the village... This isn't ROCKET SCIENCE... Figure out WHICH kid spends the most time in the KAGE'S office.. and BAM you've learned the identity of konoha's jinchuriki. Or just watch the villagers.. their basically SCREAMING IT AT THE TOP OF THEIR LUNGS! It's gotta be the WORST kept secret I've ever heard of (even in canon) (both the fox and being the 4ths kid)...

My thoughts are this.. If Minato had SO MANY TERRIBLE enemies then exactly WHAT was he going to do if he LIVED? He'd be busy with his duties as kage so he couldn't protect naruto 24/7.. SO it would be EXACTLY how it is now... My point being, I think the third is OVERESTIMATING the amount of enemies the dude had. Plus the fact that any assassin would have to 1. Break into the village... 2. Get PAST any guards.. 3. Get to the SON OF THEIR HERO.. 4. Take out said son, BEFORE backup arrives... the entire time the ENTIRE village would be AGAINST said assassin... SO not only would this keep assassin's off naruto, it would keep mobs off naruto, and would keep danzo away from him as well... You can't "brainwash" the son of the hero, they'd throw his crippled ass out of the village so fast it would give the third WHIPLASH! ANY LEADER(and especially the leader of a military town) is going to have LOADS of enemies.. It's just the way it IS.. but that didn't stop the third from having kids... OR even brain-dead grandchildren... It ALSO didn't cause him to HIDE the fact that their RELATED! (what's the difference?) aka.. The third is a buffoon.

I like this story so I have a request can u continue this if possible or rewrite it please

There is no reason for the gratuitous Japanese and the grammar is odd sometimes. In addition, the training in the beggining made no sense, as to overcome lycanthropy is a mental disipline, not a physical one. Thus the Kyuubi should have been training using meditation, not gravity seals.

I'm not sure if 6 years old kit could do that exercise BUT thanks to your Japanise fragments it doesn't mether. Great FF!

Lycanthrope is what you call someone who is effected. Lycanthropy is what you call the disease.

Sorry for being so picky,

Maltrazz

this a really good story wish you weren't discontinuing it

Dangit. it was just getting really good too. well, oh well. i'll go ahead and add it to story alert anyway, should it be updated at some other point. what is the title of the overhaul?

Hello. I am willing to take your story from you and carry on with it.

Please let me know as i think in my opion that this story IS AWESOME!

HEY THERE YOUR STORY

IS AWSOME Y LIKED VERY MUCH

Y COOL TO NOW THAT NARUTO

TRAINED WHIT KYUBI AND HINATA-CHAN

IS HIS GIRLFRIEND