beautiful

This was a interesting story about the future. The pairings are really interesting and well liked. There was a lot of description put into the story to be able to know what is happening with a vivid image in mind. There was a bit of realism to the story as you could feel the tense air in it while reading. The tenseness felt real and was presented well. The situation calmed down and I am glad to know that Hiwatari is willing to accept the baby now. I am guessing the Three Corners are Riku, Risa, and Satoshi while the heart is Daisuke. It makes sense since all three love him, but there will always be only one for him in his heart, in a way. It was very sweet and alluring to read. Very simple and to the point with a lot of complex situations. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

That was amazingly amazing!

There should have been more DaixRiku but overall it was awesome

DaixRiku4ever!

DaixRisa4NEVER!

This was...wow.

You know what I really like about this? You made it seem like even though Daisuke has three people that love him (his wife, *her* sister, and *her* husband/former rival), Riku is accepting of it. And honestly, I don't think it's a bad thing that all 3 of them love him...Just as it says in the ending, he has plenty of love to spare.

I also liked how you played out Risa and Satoshi's concerns over their child, and how that affected ALL of them. Definitely liked the part where Riku slapped Satoshi, though. I think it's worth the risk. Sure Krad might come back, but given everything that Satoshi went through, if he could make it, then so can his son.

You may want to re-check the formatting, though. There were some parts in bold, and there were some sentences with a slash and an "I" following them.

Great story, though!

Beautiful. It is very well done

Write more :)

This fic was fantastic. Thank you so much for writing this!

Very well done.

I love it! I didn't know what to expect when I read the summary (actually, I half expected it to be something like a threesome or something, there are a lot of perverts on ), but I am really happy with what I read. I love Riku and Daisuke, they are just the cutest couple I have ever had the pleasure of following. It took me a while to accept Risa and Satoshi-but overall I am pleased with how they act in your fic. I say this is a golden story- one of the rarer ones that I think would come after the series (I think you followed the anime storyline in your fic, rather than the manga). So, I loved it! You didn't overbear the character problems to disgusting angst, or overly sad. Everyone is content and happy-you can't ask for anything more.

I don't know if it's a good thing, but the thing I love the most about this fic is the summary. When they grow up, this is pretty much how I imagined their lives to be, except maybe without the Satoshi/Risa (as much a SatoDai fangirl as I am, their real future wouldn't head that way). Daisuke is amazing, and the littiel tidbits about their daily lives-insanely complicated lock and all-are beautiful. The way everyone has changed in response to the times, and perhaps more importantly, to Daisuke gives me the warm fuzzies. I never liked the Harada sisters, but Riku's voice is perfect here.

Wow - a really beautiful story!

I especially like the way Riku (and now I hope Im not going to mess upt the twins names, Im just terrible with names) sees Daisuke ans his relationship with Risa and Satoshi - or, to place it better, their relationship with him. The sisters dialogue sure was great! As was the whole story. My compliments.

Aw~! This is one of the sweetest things I've read! I love these pairings- and they're all married in this! XDXDXD This is well written, too, and the plot really emphasizes on what "might" happen and all the other "ifs" in DNAngel.

~Thanks for sharing this to the community! _

*SOB* T_T That story was heartbreakingly happy. Does that make any sense? It was wonderful and you are a fantastic writer. You captured all their relationships so perfectly. Thank you so much!

kool! i love it! aww that aint fair! don' make it the END! make MORE chapters!T.T!

this is a great fanfic!

wow! Awesome job. This fit so well with the characters and the story- it would have easily fit in as an epilogue. Their slightly-older selves fit very well with the originals. And the situation itself is very believable.

You've got a great writing style, and it all flowed very smoothly. I really enjoyed this story! :)

Fantastic.

The amount of detail you put in was breathtaking it was like it was actually part of the show. I felt like I was being drawn into the manga/anime. It was real fantastic.

But thing I have to give you the most respect for is for simple fact it was a simplistic I love you ending. Your characters were more real and multidemionsional then most give them. I could go on and on prasing you but I'm pressed for time Kudos.