ntr is really bothersome

First Yuoi fic I actually enjoyed ;) This was awesome! Such a good plot and you are an amazing writer! :D I guess I need to check out your other works now :o :D

Grate fanfic. In my opinion one of the best

Very good story I enjoyed it quite a bit.

No screwwwww you Sasuke

Most yuri and yaoi don't have a plot, and when there's a story attempted on either of the two, it's in no way shape or form, plausible. But THIS was plausible, and I absolutely loved how you did it, and how you took the pacing slow, but not too slow; honestly, you've done an amazing job with this story. You included a perfect amount of detail and emotions...very, well-written. Earlier, close to the beginning I think, you stated how you tried to think of other possible yuri pairings and I have to agree with you and state that Ino/Sakura is the only yuri pairing I could come with as well. I wanted to comment on something else you stated as well, but...I forgot. Anyway, I think I said enough, so once again; Great job.

that was good

His fic was completely amazing. The plot, the twists, the turns, and you actually made me feel emotions. Like sad, happy, curious. U should totally do a sequel.

simply amazing! Loved it although i do feel bad for chouji. hope to read more from ya :)

WOW! i luved this story! in a way it really reminded me of the movie 'being John Malcovich' but it was WAY better that that thing; and it has a better ending too. :) this was especially good because its already finished so i didn't have to wait for you to update; although from your A/N's i feel sorry for all those who did have to wait, lol.

also, i wouldn't ask you to continue this; it ended great. i luv open endings because if it continues after the guy gets the girl -or girl get the girl in this case-then there is always the chance that they'll have problems in their relationship in order for the story to still have something going on in it. and although that may be realistic...i just prefer to think of their life afterwards as amazing and perfect. im a romantic like that :D

by the way, i loved how u didn't immediatly jump into them have sex; a realistic yuri is slow going. especially since its obvious that ino and sakura were streight before this. so its only natural for them to go on dates and try to avoid their feelings for each other by keeping/getting boyfriends. all in all an amazing fic. i don't think i'll be able to read another ino/saku fic without thinking of this one and the high i got off of it. now; i'm going to end this review and go see what other fics you have. as well as put you on my fav author list!

You, my friend, have a talent for writing. I almost died a couple of times. x.x You may want to proof-read a bit, but you work full time and go to school full time, so it's totally understandable that you just write and post.

Good story although i feel sry for chouji

Rice pudding is my brain fuel... well any way good story so far

Nice story, good character development, if a bit fast in case of the Sakura in the later chapters.

The conclusion seemed a bit rushed too.

These are my only criticisms, apart from this the story was a great read and lemon and lime were used in a good and erotic (which is something that should be normal, but sadly isn't) way.

You have to be a good writer, because you don't even like Ino and Sakura and still manage to write such a good Inu/Saku story.

And didn't it feel natural to write Sasuke as a jerk? 'Cause that's what he is, you know? An awfully stupid jerk.

I like the story. The character development is certainly good by itself, but the plot and the unique usage of 'lemon details' was also fairly interesting. The only flaws I felt was that the transition from 'normal friends' to 'being in love' seems a bit abrupt, especially when Ino announces that she had actually been in love with Sakura since the academy days. I also felt that Sakura's transition from helpless dependence on Ino to rough individuality near the end chapters also seem a bit jarring.

Despite the above, I still felt that the story was immensely enjoyable to read. Great work!