I- but- Itachi's a peace loving guy, not a softie, but he wants peace, that's wy he did everything. Nothing like tom :( He's my favorite character, too.

Itachi’s line of thought is absolutely beautiful

Oh this is beautiful! I like it. I hope you find the motivation to continue it (even if it is kinda old by now).
I adore your version of Itachi and his relationship with people. It's an interesting take on his character. Most authors go with canon but that's kinda boring with enough stories, really. Your Itachi is refreshing and adorable. He loves and admires as much as he hates and degrades others. He's not unreasonable just young, radical and kinda fatalistic in his views on things.

nice story, hopefully u will continuing this one soon

THIS CLIFFHANGER IS TEARING ME APART!

*Ehem* I'm really looking forward to more chapters! You've got some seriously interesting plot devices going around.

*whispers* Do it, Itachi. NO one will care.

KILL IT WITH F-Shinobi Rule 25. Shinobi Rule 25. Shinobi rule 25...

Oh shiiiiiiiit. Itachi is going to be Voldemort 2.O.

Also, I like what you're doing. Making the plot seem as if it's apart of canon Naruto.

Oooh! I am loving how this started out and I am absolutely itching to see Itachi posing as a student with *Umbridge* (of all people) as one of his teachers!

i feel like you're downplaying Itachi's personality and capabilities. :(

You said 'easily blended in' twice; it's not a good look.

Senpai is spelled with an 'n', not an 'm'. Princesses aren't supposed to be beautiful, they're supposed to be princesses. Just because someone is part of the royal family does in no way indicate tht they are automatically beautiful. Also, smiles on the face, saying 'on the lips' is just plain annoying. I'm not going to read any further, the description made it sound worth while reading, but it obviously isn't for me.

Plz update it's been years since the last one please continue I love this it so well written and I love the plot Plz continue it :)

Senpai is spelled with an 'n', not a 'm'. Also, a (...) should have a space and capital letter after it. It is the start of a new sentence after all.

please contact me in the Hokage's Office tomorrow? He would ask that last bit, not question it.

Albus Dumbledore; this letter should have his full name because it's a formal letter, it's not going to a friend. But I understand if you didn't want to write the full thing. It's so damn long! XD

and if Uncle Obito still lived,
I'm pretty sure he'd already know obito-baka's still alive (sadly), though I don't really know. I don't follow it as closely as I should for knowing Itachi-dono sakes.

Soo... I think it's safe to say that you've either given up on this story, or died. If you gave up, could you AT LEAST LET US FREAKING KNOW!?