| Reviews for A Bet Equals Love |
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Anon chapter 21 . 7/31 Yay, thank you for the chapter! Update soon- and hope you’re well! |
Annabella435 chapter 21 . 7/9 This fic is really good. I love it so much and some how I end up coming back to it and re-reading it! The characters are fun and the plot’s interesting, I hope your doing well rn and update soon since most of us are in quarantine. :) |
Guest chapter 21 . 6/22 Gah! Yay, so glad you updated! Hope you're staying safe and well. And loved the chap :D |
IceNinjaLegacy chapter 21 . 5/23 It's been a while since I last checked fanfiction, I love what you've been doing with this; I can't wait until he starts getting suspicious/ figures out what's going on. I'm excited for more! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/20 AHHH I love it |
Guest chapter 21 . 5/20 I really enjoyed the chapter you added, the story is really good and I hope you will update more during this time! I loove your story so far. |
schak chapter 21 . 4/29 This story is just brilliant. I love the interactions between the characters and how you respect all of them with the way you write them. I like how things develop in small ways, so small that they seem invisible at first but all together change things so much. |
Guest chapter 21 . 4/29 this was sO good omfg i can't believe you've updated. i remember i stumbled along this fic like, last year? and it was amazing but when i reached the end i felt like i was gonna cry because i saw your last update was in 2016 or something. christ, i really really hope James finds out about lily's secret because i'm literally dYING for the romance to start and for lily to expose her secret to everyone. i do hope you update again soon but if you don't it's fine and i rEALLY hope you continue this fic until the end. love from spain,,, xxx |
saralynfara chapter 21 . 4/29 I am! It was nice, just... I like to nitpick so : you emphasize the thing about football like her giving away she is a muggleborn. Er... she gave the name of the Queen of England as an alias before and you even made pointed out that half-blood get it and have to explain it for the wizzards. So, she deliberately gave away that she was a muggleborn as soon as they met, it's kind of a non-issue by this point (also, she could be half-blood by that logic, or the daughter of muggle's enthusiasts like the Weasley, which are coincidentally also notorious for their red hair?). And maybe I'm not remembering something, but... he has two conversations with her and he doesn't recognize her voice and the way she talks at all? I mean, it should at least sound familiar - he spends a lot of time with Lily and has for a while, now. |
Anon chapter 15 . 2/22 Please please please finish this fic. It’s sooooo different and refreshing and fabulous but I can tell bc there are only 5 chapters left that you haven’t finished it and probably won’t and it is DEVASTATING. This story is just knocking it out the park with how new and fresh it is; I am loving how you avoid cliche tropes or even cliche Jily tropes, and instead serve up something totally original, exciting and addictive! This fic has so much potential, especially with how organic and kind of amazing the relationship has been established; the roots are there for it to grow from working against each to truly understanding each other and really helping the other person grow ...together. I love how natural the relationship is, nothing feels forced and no one is running around carrying the idiot ball in total contrast to their character, nobody is having plot convenient miscommunications etc. PLEASE finish this fic! Or else, let me do it for you? Is that a thing? I’m just trying to avoid the devastation and see this amazing potential bloom into a rich, fulfilling completed story! |
DiEvans chapter 20 . 2/1 i miss this story. |
Y.V.Fairy chapter 1 . 11/27/2019 I just started reading and I like it. Very much. It isn't usual story. I appreciate the fact that it's different from most things I've been reading so far. 3 |
Xanonx chapter 20 . 11/10/2019 I miss this story so much! Hope you bring it back soon. |
Guest chapter 20 . 10/3/2019 I really like your story please update soon! |
Anon chapter 20 . 8/6/2019 As always, this story keeps me so very invested! |