This story and Soul Splinters are 2 of the best Pretender fanfics I have read. All I can say is please write more stories.

hi again,

Hope you get this, I meant to send an email. I haven't checked mine, but wanted to drop you another note since I just finished re-reading this. I remember starting the story a while ago, but don't remember if I finished it or sent reviews.

Anyway, I really enjoyed it and found it to be another page turner. I don't recall if English is a second language for you; it seems like you've really improved on your use of the language over time and your punctuation/grammar is better than most native users. hehe Loved the way you intertwined the different storylines and had them come together in the end. That's a talent in and of itself. Makes me think of how a composer works with the components of music and weaves the instruments together into a cohesive piece. (I just watched Almadeus again so Mozart is on my mind.)

Again, I'm also impressed with how you capture the characters and the subtleties (sp?) of their personalities. You are a fine writer, heads and shoulders above the riff-raff found on ffn.

BTW, there's a mistake that you made in this story and also in the current one that I don't know if it's typo or not. Instead of "off" you keep typing "of," so watch out for that.

Also, it's great to see you use correct punctuation, when quoting characters. I've been working hard trying to hammer it into Katie's head. Next time I talk to her, I tell her to look at your stories for another example. When I just proofed ch.11, I explain about things like dependent clauses, semi-colons, prepositions and quoting but it would take too long to change everything throughout the story. I just change a handful and suggest she try to catch more of them next chapter. She's improving each time. She told me a funny thing; apparently Kye is changing back some of what I correct. Lol as she would say.

Well, I didn't mean for this to be so long; I guess I'm in a chatty mood. Let me know if you got this.

Take care,

Terra

PS This review has not been proofed. hahaha

Okay so somehow i managed to miss the ending of the story. (I was away in Peru! Terra reminded me I had left it unfinished!).

So here I go:

WOW..WOW..WOW! So creative! I love the Raptus project, as it seems very plausible (whoa someone has been watching too much x-files) that they would have some sort of 'long-term' scheme! You portrayed MP very well as well! Perfect! (She is soo tricky sometimes!)

Great job as always! So belated thumbs up.

love you story so far keep on writing.

Please update soon!

Thanks for the update, another brilliant story.

Great story yet again,hope to read more soon. julie

Wonderful ending to a very good story. Thanks for sharing, Cathy.

This was a fantastic story. You write so well. Do other fanfics like this one. I'm eager to read your next stories, but I know you'd already started some! By the way, you're very productive. So, I'm waiting your new creations, but I hope you'll continue SSII. And, for the last time, it was a fabulous fanfiction with a lot of action and suspense. As always, you respect very well the Centre's world and atmosphere and that's the way I love it. Great job!

This was a great ride. Thank you for sharing such a well-written story with us!

One heck of a ride this during this story. A soft ending, but it's only appropriate given the previous events :)

And please do finish those other tP stories you are writing on, and of course write even more!

I said it before and I can say it one more time. Great story and it was wonderful time spent by reading and waiting for next chapter. I would miss it. But Im sure that there will be another great stories from you.

Wonderful story. Hope you do more.

Cliffhanger! "I'll decide who'll live or die". Please continue soon. Great chapter!

Just so you know: I'm going to hate you forever if you kill off Jarod ;-) What else can I say? Great chapter! And bad guys beware when Miss Parker and Margaret team up!