| Reviews for Lifeblood |
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muzicaldove chapter 7 . 11/13/2017 please continue! |
Kirara chapter 7 . 5/26/2017 Wow! This has to be the best Kakahina that I've read. And all the characters are in-character (lol). And wow, I really team 8 but their team dynamics are not really shown in the series (really, there's not enough screen time with them) and this is how I imagine their interaction would be. I also love the progression between Kakashi and Hinata. The slow burn is making me squeal with delight! But honestly, are you still gonna update? :( This is just too good of a story to be abandoned. |
sumiko808 chapter 7 . 8/12/2016 Damn this is really good. I'm just sad that it's not completed. Seriously, the plotline is interesting and you really kept each character in character. |
jessica-semnadaprafaze123 chapter 7 . 6/8/2016 I pray that you update this fanfic. I'll wait patiently, I promise. |
sundes2013 chapter 7 . 6/6/2014 Awesome! Awesome! Man this story is getting good. I wonder what all of this will lead to. I am glad that's you are not abandoning this story, it is too good to leave it behind. This is one of the best kakahinta out there. I will wait patiently to update. I hope life will serve you well. |
sundes2013 chapter 6 . 6/5/2014 Wow, this chapter was really breathtaking! All the characters in their own way are developing and I love how you add other characters like Naruto and Neji in cooperating with the story, even though they are not part of the plot. That's is pure genius! I love how Kakashi is opening up to her and you are right he covered his emotions. Being with Hinata he is opening up to her. All of these incidents that has been happening all around them had led them to become closer than teacher/student relationship. I love the moment when Hinata was reflecting on her comrades as she when she was on the ground, almost on the verge to be defeated. Her home, including her teammates and sensei, had motivated her to not give up, to not be bound by the opinions of her father. This emotional part during the battle scene is so like Kishimoto! Ahh you're too good! I also like how you input the Banshi's thoughts too as she's considered her 'success' by waking up the 'dorment beast' inside of her. This is so like Kishimoto! Are you him? Haha. Well done! |
sundes2013 chapter 4 . 6/5/2014 Aww this is really nice, I love the progression of Kakashi's relationship with his new teammates, especially with Hinata. The team is getting their own spotlight, which is good. :) I also love that you add the moments when Kakashi is in introspection. I love Shino and Kiba interaction, it's too funny. Kiba being talkative! XD Wow how did I not read this amazing story before?! |
sundes2013 chapter 2 . 6/5/2014 This is really nice. I love that everyone is in character. In reading each of the character's dialogue, I could picture them speaking in my head. And yes, Kiba and Shino really care for Hinata and want her to get better. I really love your Kakashi, he's is obervant, analytical, and willing to help and protect his students. I love your description, especially the way you described the attacks. I could picture it inside my head. I am learning more of the characters through your writing. |
sundes2013 chapter 1 . 6/5/2014 Aww, this is really nice, great introduction. :D Poor Kakashi. |
heza-chan24 chapter 5 . 1/22/2013 I am so enjoying this story! I am liking the character development and the flow. I do hope that you finish this! I can't wait to read what happens! |
Seraphina Dragon chapter 7 . 12/23/2012 hope to read morw |
JadedGothButterfly chapter 7 . 9/29/2012 Amazing, well-written plot. Update soon. |
orange.leaf.hokage chapter 7 . 9/27/2012 I love kakahina and you've done the best job out there portraying them believably. PLEASE continue writing. Were all waiting anxiously!:) |
notmenotinotyou chapter 7 . 7/15/2012 Wow this is amazing. I love the direction you've taken this! I love the way you are building the relationship between kakashi and hinata and showing hinatas relationship with comrades and her family. You have so many interesting plots going its just enthralling! I read on your profile that you do intend to finish this and I really hope you do. There aren't many good kakahina fics around so I hope you complete this! So overall don't forget there are those here who love and support your stories! I will wait patiently for an update. |
clow-san chapter 7 . 6/29/2011 Wow. Just wow. This is just an epic. Wonderful characterization. I will probably believe you if you say you're Kishimoto in disguise. The canon characters are so, well, in character. Your OC villains are threating but not to an obnoxious degree as other writers are prone to do. Your prose is detail and not flowery. The pace of the story and the development of the relationship between Kakashi and Hinata is believable and not rushed. The way you incorporate canon events are wonderful and the spotlight in team 8 is exquisite. I know you haven't updated in a while but this is just awesome that I can wait however long. Please continue. |