Not really sure about the ending tho. Its kinda anti-climatic.

Omg. I really like Hinata stories like this. LOVING IT

loved this one so muchhhhhh

that ending tho...

Yes, buuut... D:, I highly doubt that Uchiha would have been killed by Neji. Soz.

You rendered me speechless again. Loved Hinatas portrayed. Mesmerising and her relation with Sasuke.

That. Was. AWESOME!

*pats Hanabi's head* That's true kid.. so true.. Well technically no, but all the same, it is partially true.

Admittedly, Hinata was a tad selfish there. Since she had wanted to stop being the protector, she let her sister kill her..

Neji-nii-sama! *gushes*

Anyway, that was a good read. Thanks.

I loved this! Oh course, minus hinata's death. I loved the poems, even though they were slightly unerving. But i loved how you portayed hinata as a protecter, staying true to the end!

Amazing!

and you could fit this all into one side/chapter?

I luv the plot, and the meaning behind the story (I just hope I'd understood it).

The Language and the writing style is really good! And I really enjoyed reading it!

And btw Good job on the story!

Hope you write some more!

-Jiin

you wrote this when you were 14. wow you're so talented. this story is long but yeah its easier to edit instead of breaking it into two chapters.

i love the fic especially the short poems and also how hinata is brilliant without showing that she is

naash

nice job! i loved the ending.

Awww. That was sad, but beautifully written! I loved the SasuHina interactions! Great work!

this is so awesome!1 hinata rulez! 3sasuhina

'( so sad but so good (