it was really cute, it really made me smile. I love your writting, I truly do.

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I can't think of anyway this should be changed. It's really so straight from the heart, and I loved how deeply you were able to delve into the meanings of words. With your writing style, I don't think I'd ever be able to get tired of your deep-ness. XD

And yay, Miyako is like the regular fangirl who won the jackpot, huh?

Oi, you've finally updated! _

Meeh, Zero Two's a bit shady in my head (it helps I never watched the whole thing...but I watched the stuff you were talking about for the most part) but you seemed to get it right. The fangirly handshake moment and them finding out he was Kaiser.

It was a more grown up Miyako but still Miyako. Yes it could have been a bit longer but I did like it. Miyako isn't quite the most loved Digimon character and it's nice to see her get the spotlight for once without her personality getting trashed.

I actually forgot about fanfiction all together until I got the e-mail saying there was an update. XD

Well, as usual it was excellent. The soccer intro was fun, and the "short but to the point" was nice too. It also explains the Daisuke/Takeru thing very well, even if it's just one take on the whole situation. Ironically, I also liked how it wasn't really resolved in the end, because in the other chapters the characters felt complete and fully aware of their relationship. Daisuke's still feeling a little confused and isn't quite content yet.

Er, yeah... I'll enjoy the next update, whenever you can manage it. _

good story...it's kinda deeper from what you find here

great, can't wait for next...I wonder who is it?

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You know,Daisuke is not thekind of character I typically see as being anything like angsty, but you, you actually managed that. It's in character, and the sort of angle that is rarely explore of him.

Great work. Do you have plans for female characters?

I like that this has been a little be different from the last ones, because Daisuke really isn't liking who he's talking to, and not apologizing for it or anything. It's believably Daisuke, and I especially like the brief wavering at the end.

one word: WOW!

Are you sure your not Taichi? Cause this is unbelevably like him!

It was so nice! I could feel it! Seriously!

Nice! Really nice!

Hey again! I think I can agree with the room for improvement for Kouji, though he is a hard character to get right. I ended up writing him too nice in this one lame fanfic I wrote with a friend (as in, Kouji post-Digimon when i needed to be writing a Kouji who just showed up). And poor Takuya... am I the only one who has faith in his brain power? He seemed like the only goggle head to attempt to think logically and wasn't totally dense like Taichi and Daisuke are sometimes (Takato doesn't count-being naive is not being stupid). But it works for Kouji, though... I saw the question/list and couldn't help banging my forehead, which didn't help the headache. XD Not that it was bad, it was just so silly/stupid that...yeah, okay. Takuya was protrayed very well in Kouji's POV, I'll give you props for that!

I'm only as familiar with Frontier as what I've read about it, but I really liked this chapter.

A true Taichi stream of consciousness, complete with the random "that one is not my problem, deal with it yourself" bits.

While I disagree with your Takeru's considering that Patamon took care of him prior to the Devimon battle, I do like his comparison of the Hope/Light and Darkness/Light oppositions.