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I love Jess/Pollock. I think I was the only person who see a chemistry between us. I'm happy too see it's not true.

Thank you!

Thanks for posting.

I like Jess with Jack,but it's a great story.

This storyline is kind of creepy. I'm so suprised that all the characters are encouraging their relationship and it's very sentimental. Since it's exacting emotion from me it must be well written but it is very strange in my eyes. Keep it going.

Wow I love it I always wondered what it would be like if they got together!

great update!

Agree with most of what Lexiegurl has said...great idea though i love Pollock/Jess stories.

one suggestion though - you've kind of changed Pollock...he doesn't seem as hard as he is...you can still make him hard but lovable.

like the idea of Nic being fed up with Pollock

Decent chapter, but there are things that can be improved.

Your spelling isn't the best but is pretty decent considering.

Another problem I noticed is that you use alot of the same words over, and over and over. I've had people catch me on that and tell me how to fix it... so I've been there

Also, your sentences don't flow the best they could...

A small suggestion is to get a beta reader because that's what I do and it has helped me greatly.

Hope for the next chapter to be even better than this.

interesting chapter! ccute that Jess wants to adopt them.

love it. update soon!

The story is a good idea, but you need to stop making new stories because you haven't finished any of your other ones and it's getting annoying.

YEAH! I love Pollock/Mastriani STories... but there are just so few out there...

(I am writing some by my own, but in german).

So please write on, I am looking forward to another chapter!